I'm Sorry

Learning this lesson was not an easy lesson to learn.

I'm sorry I fell for you
I thought you had fallen for me too
I'm sorry our love couldn't be
Because you didn't see enough in me
I'm sorry, I thought when two hearts joined together
They would connect as one
But I guess I was wrong...
I'm sorry I'm not like every other girl you've dated...
But then again.... I'm not sorry!
I'm sorry I have class
And respect for myself
Not to be that submissive
I'm sorry I've learned from past mistakes
To help me make better choices today
I'm sorry it took heartache after heartache
To learn that guys like you are nothing
I'm sorry that I'm making better choices today,
Than I did yesterday
I'm sorry I've gained sense
To not fall for your stupid game
I'm sorry I'm not as naive
As I once was...
I'm sorry I'm not the same girl I use to be
I'm sorry you missed out.....

Author's Note

Do things need to be spaced?

Reviews

[Millie]

This is AMA-ZING loved every word, it's true guys seem to go for the girl that are too in love with them to see wrong in them . But then BAM we gain respect for our selves and come to our sense and realise we don't need people like them in our live.

I loved this, Wonderful write :)

Sorry it posted so many times.x

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is fine. Spaces can help if you read aloud. Give you boundaries and limits to speak strongly or weakly. I like this poem. Being sorry is something we will feel daily and can't allow to slow us down. Life is a constant lesson. A wise person learn something new everyday. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[unknown]

Oh how I can relate to this!

[Kelly M.]

This is so true! If your boyfriend doesn't appreciate you for you than he's not worth having. How sad it is that people do this to you. But, of course, there is someone out there. Someone perfectly made just for you someday. It was a touchingly sweet write! Nice one! :)

[E.Gleaves]

good work

[A.E. Surdam]

I liked it, it was very good. Nah, it doesn't need to be spaced. It just breaks up into stanzas, like taking a breath for instance. If you like them all together in one stanza than hey, go for it, girl. I like the way it is. :)

[CagedBIRDsings]

So true. Sometimes, girls are so lovesick they let themselves be controlled and used until a day comes when they snap out of it and gain respect for themselves. I loved the poem. Good Job, and I don't think that extra spacing is that neccesary :)

[Allie :)]

It'd be nice if you slid some stanzas into this piece,
but nevertheless, the message you're trying to send is painstakingly obvious (you might want to put just a smidge more mystery and question into your pieces, but I'm not saying that this isn't good, give them the benefit of the doubt :D) and extremely clear. You dated a douchebag, when he left/hurt you, you felt terrible, but eventually realized how much better than him you are :D Congratulations!

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

You did a good job of putting specific details in this poem that paint a clear picture of this relationship. Nice message of respecting yourself and believing that you deserve better.

[∂αʌ<..]

wow!