Stand

I hope this inspires someone.

Stand....
When there's nothing you can do
Stand..... when your back's against the wall
Stand....
When there's no where else to turn
Stand....
When fake friends say goodbye
Stand........
Look around,
Only the strong will survive...
Are you one of them?
My advice to you...
Is to keep on standing
Because your day will come
Sooner than you think...

Author's Note

This was written 2/6/11.

Reviews

[Victoria]

I liked this. It had a lot of truth and inspiration to it. Reminds me of a song that I just listened to. It's called walk on the water. It's message is for someone to keep moving on no matter how down they feel or get. That's kind of what yours is saying. To keep going. Great job!!!

[kaylynnmelody♥]

it's hard to stand up when you think everything is falling apart. thank you for the read request. it was a great read.

[Jazique]

That was nice creative and strong. It really spoke to the reader and love how you used repititon in your writing and its like a spoken word poem simple and sweet with thought put into it. Excellent job and keep it up and remain Standing.

[realmwriter]

And I Stand! Clapping as I read this! Wonderfully inspiring write. Thank you so much, a pure joy to read!

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What a passionate write. I like the ending a lot: "Sooner than you think", that really is inspiring.

[Rediscovery]

This is a very inspirational poem. And it reminds me of Rascal Flatts' song, Stand. Great job.

[Krystal Nicole]

Very well written and inspirational!!! Great read.

[lovejulez03]

Ohh I liked this one alot. It's very true. You have to keep fighting. Falling doesn't mean you give up but if you don't GET back up then that's as good as giving up. Well written :)

[RidingTheWind]

This is very inspirational, and I love the overall meaning behind it. I hope you write more things like this.

[Yina]

Very inspiring:)