Mouse Trap

I've been stuck in this trap

Time and time again,

Thinkin' things will be different

But they are all ways still the same

Is it me, for believing in you?

And the things you say

I feel like a cute little mouse

Dogging the kill every time

Because my minds says go,

And my heart says stay,

I don't want to be the one

That continues to go for the

"Good Cheese"

I'm tired of this mouse trap,

I just want to roam freely

Reviews

[Allie :)]

*all ways- always
*thinkin'-thinking
*dogging-dodging
The idea is good, but I have a difficult time reading past simple grammatical mistakes and mistypings, so I didn't get very far...sorry :/
And as bitchy as that sounded, I didn't mean to sound bitchy.

[Helen]

Outstanding!

It's all about being a creature of habit.

There is plenty of "Good Cheese" out there. You don't necessarily have to lay your neck on the line to nibble on the feast.

Go for the cheese that doesn't choke the life out you :-)

very well written & crative write

[Coyote Poetry]

The ending is very good logic. If someone wants to lock you in and control you. Best escape before the prison is built. I like the flow and strong words trying to figure out what is right or wrong. A outstanding poem. Freedom is missed when we don't have it anymore.
Coyote

[raindroplove]

very good ......