Mouse Trap

I've been stuck in this trap

Time and time again,

Thinkin' things will be different

But they are all ways still the same

Is it me, for believing in you?

And the things you say

I feel like a cute little mouse

Dogging the kill every time

Because my minds says go,

And my heart says stay,

I don't want to be the one

That continues to go for the

"Good Cheese"

I'm tired of this mouse trap,

I just want to roam freely

Reviews

[Allie :)]

*all ways- always
*thinkin'-thinking
*dogging-dodging
The idea is good, but I have a difficult time reading past simple grammatical mistakes and mistypings, so I didn't get very far...sorry :/
And as bitchy as that sounded, I didn't mean to sound bitchy.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Omgosh how I can relate so well to this poem. I feel as if you reached into my soul and took the words straight from me. This is excellent work, Ta'shandra. Thanks so much for sharing it with the world.

[E.Gleaves]

simple words but a very deep message. keep up the good work

[?]

Nice, very nice
Sometimes the hardest thing to do is the right thing.
flow was great

[Jess Holden]

I love itt :D never stop writing!!

[A.E. Surdam]

:) Really liked this. Was cute and simple and very expressive as it reached out to me. Very nice.

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem uses a cute metaphor for explaining the need to be free the need to change things in your life. the metaphor was used creatively.

[Letemdangle]

Your poetry is always down to Earth and feels like you are saying it from a park bench or a simple chair with complete honesty.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the ending was my fav part. :) i like this

[The old me]

great poem of passion and comparsion.

[Gone]

Reminds me of being stuck in the same spot for a long time. Incredibly written