Cookie Jar

Cookie Jar

A Poem by Tasha

Memories from our past
has affected our present
and if we don't do something about it
it will affect our future
so I'm putting you in
the cookie jar

Every moment we shared,
every talk,
every text,
made me feel a part of you
so you're going in the cookie jar

I thought things would last
but you're just like a delicious cookie
waiting to be devoured
but you're just empty calories
going to my thighs

Oh little cookie jar
you kept everything
a little secret,
making sure I forget him
when I throw away the cookie jar

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
My friend wanted a twist on something and someone she loved.

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A very silly poem (in a good way). I laughed all through it. I love your idea of putting away memries like putting things into a cookie jar. A good poem, i really like it. And if someone doesnt like this poem then i will hogtie them and throw them into the cookie jar only to be eaten later by a fat kid. XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


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thank you.......i need that today.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely metaphor :) Last stanza's good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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