Cookie Jar

Memories from our past
has affected our present
and if we don't do something about it
it will affect our future
so I'm putting you in
the cookie jar

Every moment we shared,
every talk,
every text,
made me feel a part of you
so you're going in the cookie jar

I thought things would last
but you're just like a delicious cookie
waiting to be devoured
but you're just empty calories
going to my thighs

Oh little cookie jar
you kept everything
a little secret,
making sure I forget him
when I throw away the cookie jar

Author's Note

My friend wanted a twist on something and someone she loved.

Reviews

[RedInk524]

A very silly poem (in a good way). I laughed all through it. I love your idea of putting away memries like putting things into a cookie jar. A good poem, i really like it. And if someone doesnt like this poem then i will hogtie them and throw them into the cookie jar only to be eaten later by a fat kid. XD

[WynterPhoenix]

I love the cookie jar concept. This poem was very ammusing and the ending was great ♥

[Kelly M.]

This is an interesting twist for a poem. Unique and imaginative! Good write! :)

[Lily Mae]

I like the clever twist.. great write :) x

[Gone]

I loved this

[Coyote Poetry]

'Memories from our past
has effected our present"
You are a wise young lady. Your words are true. We will pay for all the good and bad action we do sooner or later. Karma can be a bear. I like how you used the cookie jar. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

awesome!

its' so great when a metaphor pops into our head, this is amazing!

[Kotsidou Elmira]

I love the metaphor, it suits someone I know.
Funny poem with a deeper meaning.
Like.