Mind Games

Mind Games

A Poem by Tasha
"

I thought this was fun

"
The way you write
is so pleasing...
it has a secret meaning,
that only you and I can tell
because we are somewhat alike
and both share the same passion...
the passion to write
to everyone else that reads our writes,
thinks it's a mind game....
~ Or is it ? ~

Maybe you'll understand it

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
Should this be longer? Let me know what you think.

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I like the length of the poem. You made your point loud and clear. When two minds think a like. A great friendship can be built. A excellent poem. Writers do have a common bond. People who love words can always find something in common.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is good. I like it...When we are in tune with someone we can read between the lines.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Normally I suggest contraction rather than expanding. You have a great idea with your poem but normally when someone ask if something should be expanded they haven't flushed the idea out fully. If you want to expand than do so

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the length of the poem. You made your point loud and clear. When two minds think a like. A great friendship can be built. A excellent poem. Writers do have a common bond. People who love words can always find something in common.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Tasha
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Hey, I'm 18 years old and I love writing. "To know me is to love me" "Every heart has a beat and mine just skips for you" Wanna know more? Message me I love to make new friends. &heart.. more..

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