Mind Games

I thought this was fun

The way you write
is so pleasing...
it has a secret meaning,
that only you and I can tell
because we are somewhat alike
and both share the same passion...
the passion to write
to everyone else that reads our writes,
thinks it's a mind game....
~ Or is it ? ~

Maybe you'll understand it

Author's Note

Should this be longer? Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the length of the poem. You made your point loud and clear. When two minds think a like. A great friendship can be built. A excellent poem. Writers do have a common bond. People who love words can always find something in common.
Coyote

[Gone]

Oh it's perfect the way it is. An excellent poem

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

The short length suits it. If you try to add more it could just confuse the poem. It's perfect at that length. Short, sweet, and to the point. Great poem :)

[Katannaism]

I think the short length suits. Length doesn't really matter when the contents are good. And this is better than good. This is an excellent write! Keep it up! ;)

[Kotsidou Elmira]

No, the length is good, so is the poem.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I understand it perfectly and I like it!

[Lily Mae]

I think it's clear and precise only you'll know if the point has gotten across :) xx

[Helen]

Who can tell what is inside anothers head, heart or soul? It is always amazingly awesome when you can connect with another through the written word....

Simply lovely :-)

[Aidz]

Indeed I do ... good write ;)

[Allen Smuckler]

Your poem is definitely long enough..it's your emotions and passion that will continue to grow...You'll have plenty of time to say what's on your mind...A very good write, Ta'shandra.
Allen