Mind Games

I thought this was fun

The way you write
is so pleasing...
it has a secret meaning,
that only you and I can tell
because we are somewhat alike
and both share the same passion...
the passion to write
to everyone else that reads our writes,
thinks it's a mind game....
~ Or is it ? ~

Maybe you'll understand it

Author's Note

Should this be longer? Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the length of the poem. You made your point loud and clear. When two minds think a like. A great friendship can be built. A excellent poem. Writers do have a common bond. People who love words can always find something in common.
Coyote

[The old me]

a bit longer could make it really good. but overall this is really good.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

this is really good..i liked it (:

[Letemdangle]

I find that fewer words allow for greater understanding.

[fireblossom]

I like it. It's strange how once we connect, we can understand one another through our poetry.

I really like this poem.

[Jazique]

I agree the lenght is great. Its not the length of your work that makes it great but the words and way their put in by the writer. So I must say well to showing the connection between a friendship that they only can understand each thoughts and words while everyone else think its a mind game because they just don't get it. Bravo to as if you spoke from the heart and you did it nice and simple.

[compositionc]

I think the length is perfect. It's well done. Writers can understand each other better than other people can. Though the Mario picture is puzzling...

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

hm.. to me this is a little confusing. im not quite sure what to say

[Karina Anderson]

I could feel a continuous story in here if you carried on. Cuz the beginning here, is quite good. It's headed in a really wonderful direction. I conspiring story of two people, a shared passion, maybe a ignited spark. Where could we be headed? You have a great skill inside of you, to carry a story with in verses. I encourage you to push forward!

[Alicia Hirshey]

I like it just the way it is. We all have a lot that we would like to express in our poetry, and to be honest I perfer short poems.

[WynterPhoenix]

I enjoyed this. The length is just right for this particular poem. And I definately agree. Most of my friends write, and the ones that don't tell me I'm weird when they read my stuff because they never try to find a meaning in the words. It's frustrating.