Mind Games

I thought this was fun

The way you write
is so pleasing...
it has a secret meaning,
that only you and I can tell
because we are somewhat alike
and both share the same passion...
the passion to write
to everyone else that reads our writes,
thinks it's a mind game....
~ Or is it ? ~

Maybe you'll understand it

Author's Note

Should this be longer? Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the length of the poem. You made your point loud and clear. When two minds think a like. A great friendship can be built. A excellent poem. Writers do have a common bond. People who love words can always find something in common.
Coyote

[trainwreck]

I like the length and I like the style. Good job on this one. Honestly, I can't think of much to say that was absent from the poem. Lovely.

[brenda]

really great makes you winder yeah short !

[Aurora Lynn]

I liked reading this poem! There are certainly lots of pieces like that that my best friends have a lot of secret meanings. I totally relate with this poem!

[Valentine]

It is all right as it is but a few more lines could only add to it..Kathie

[akapr17other]

I like it. I like the length, but maybe just another line or two because I like the idea so much. Anyway, thanks for sharing.

[dreaming dame]

It's cute. It's true too. NIce. :)

[Julie Beth]

i think its perfect the way it is don't change it awesome job :)

[LA Lorena]

There is something very pleasing about being on the same page as someone else, just "getting" them, and they "get" you. No need for explanations, just two writers connecting.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A clear and pleasantly written prose, an ode to life study, well done

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a great poem. I love it when a writer writes something that makes me feel as if they took the words right out of my mouth.