Creative Passion

To have a passion for something
is expressing your creativity,
to have individuality
is not being afraid
to be yourself,
because there's no one else
you can be
so who cares what others think
because there's only one of me
and only one of you
and that's enough for the world
as long as you have creative passion

Reviews

[Silver]

How true! Just a few things jumped out at me. I think that you could have a had a few periods in here (after 'you can be' and the last line). I also think that creative passion might not be the best two words to describe it, but they're okay. I would change the 'is expressing' in the beginning of the second line to 'and to express', but that's just me. Other than that, I really like this poem and I just wish that's how it worked.

[Karina Anderson]

Truth.

[zappy]

nice and very true .