Creative Passion

Creative Passion

A Poem by Tasha

To have a passion for something
is expressing your creativity,
to have individuality
is not being afraid
to be yourself,
because there's no one else
you can be
so who cares what others think
because there's only one of me
and only one of you
and that's enough for the world
as long as you have creative passion

© 2011 Tasha


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How true! Just a few things jumped out at me. I think that you could have a had a few periods in here (after 'you can be' and the last line). I also think that creative passion might not be the best two words to describe it, but they're okay. I would change the 'is expressing' in the beginning of the second line to 'and to express', but that's just me. Other than that, I really like this poem and I just wish that's how it worked.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So true! I love this! I believe no one should ever doubt their talent, whatever it may be.. a person's passion is what drives them to be who they are. No one should be afriad to be themselves even if others may not accept you. There will always be people who love you just the way you are. And love what you do. =D I believe that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How true! Just a few things jumped out at me. I think that you could have a had a few periods in here (after 'you can be' and the last line). I also think that creative passion might not be the best two words to describe it, but they're okay. I would change the 'is expressing' in the beginning of the second line to 'and to express', but that's just me. Other than that, I really like this poem and I just wish that's how it worked.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sadly, the world does not work this way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Your words are very true. If you look at the past. The great writers, painters and people of music were considered a bit crazy and odd. Thank you. No-one changed their view and they left us great words, paintings and music. A outstanding poem. Than you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Words so true spoken from an expert.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very true indeed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very true words you have written

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The first letter of every line should be capitalized and the words should read as sentences so you need more punctuation. But good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very good one. Enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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