Bite Me

This turned out a lot differently than I thought it would.

Bite me, as if it's your symbol of keeping me close
so I won't ever let go
bite me because you love me
hold me tight
'cause I won't ever release
from this hold you have on me
bite me with all those strong teeth you have
keep me under your lips
and hold on as tight as you can
because I want this bite to last forever...
so just bite me until I go insane!!

Reviews

[WhoIsAmelia?]

I don't know where you meant to go with this one, but I like the crazed vampire place you ended up. Resembles to me a sort of twisted romance where the girl is sort of obsessed and, if I may, slightly delusional (*cough cough bella swan*). Perfect poem for all the vampire lovers out there, and an awesome, freaky write too!

[Fabric Pulse]

As though you're calling out to life to come and play.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I feel you started off with one theme and ended up with quite a different one, and bravo my daring, well penned with a dark almost horrific sense or power, good read.

[zappy]

Nice . its really simple a understanding .