Goodbye

This is for my amazing grandmother.

I know that this is hard to say
but I gotta tell you anyway.... goodbye
I remember all the things you use to tell me
and how we'd laugh and cry
I'ma miss that and you
so this is why I gotta say goodbye
the memories will never fade away,
they'll be in my heart to stay, so goodbye
and I hope you'll never forget me
cause baby I could never forget you
so this is our final goodbye
until we meet again

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

This is beautiful and special to me. I just lost my Mother on July 4th..and this is taps into the feelings in my home right now. I wish my 17 year old son could express his loss and love through poetry.. Your amazing and so is this piece:) Thank you for sharing..:) xx

[E.Gleaves]

It's simple but effective. I Like the last line to. It's kinda like a love merry go round even though your saying goodbye you intend to be back again.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, beautiful and full of emotionally charged imagery that leads the reader to tears of hope, well done.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I agree what an excellent tribute to one you love so much.......

[Judy Ponceby]

Wonderful tribute to your grandmother Ta'shandra. She would be proud how wonderfully you have remembered her. :)

[trainwreck]

wow this was awesome! great job at tributing.