Goodbye

This is for my amazing grandmother.

I know that this is hard to say
but I gotta tell you anyway.... goodbye
I remember all the things you use to tell me
and how we'd laugh and cry
I'ma miss that and you
so this is why I gotta say goodbye
the memories will never fade away,
they'll be in my heart to stay, so goodbye
and I hope you'll never forget me
cause baby I could never forget you
so this is our final goodbye
until we meet again

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

This is beautiful and special to me. I just lost my Mother on July 4th..and this is taps into the feelings in my home right now. I wish my 17 year old son could express his loss and love through poetry.. Your amazing and so is this piece:) Thank you for sharing..:) xx

[Sunni Davis]

This is so sadly beautiful and something I can relate too. I lost my grandmother when I was seventeen. I was very close to her and losing her devastated me. I hope you find comfort in your memories of your grandmother.

[Audrey Howitt]

Such a sweet gift you gave her by writing this. Thanks for brightening my evening with the love you bear for her.

[Katannaism]

Short-exquisite, and speaking volumes of emotion. Its also very simple and very sweet yet tragic, so everything is captured and projected well in this piece. ;)

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Aww it is so sad when we loose a loved one. When my grandparents passed away I did the same, wrote a poem for them.
What a nice poem for you grandmother. Very beautiful and so special

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a sad poem but written with total empathy.
It is moving work.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

beautiful and sad

[Sukriti Suki]

A lovely tribute x

[Yina]

That's really sweet:) Very nice:)

[brenda]

i lost my grandma too i love the poem:)

[LA Lorena]

This is an amazing piece! So many people can relate to what you write about so beautifully. I hope the words bring you some comfort and healing. I'm sure your grandmother is smiling down in pride! Well done!