The other review people are all correct, you should give never up on life. Though i go through the same state, people are always cranky and act like they dont see me. What I do is to try my best to smile and show them what I can do best. Keep the faith, Tasha and i know from the bottom of my heart you will make it. =)
you had better not, you silly woman! your writing has become so good over the last months it would be a crime for you to stop.....this is good. it's all in the interpretation. i like your poetry so....don't you dare!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you as always quinn. I appreciate it, and I decided not to!
The other review people are all correct, you should give never up on life. Though i go through the same state, people are always cranky and act like they dont see me. What I do is to try my best to smile and show them what I can do best. Keep the faith, Tasha and i know from the bottom of my heart you will make it. =)
i like this poem, it relates to many people. And though its short and simple, it completely portrays the feeling of hopelessness. well done, and never give up :)
Never give up Tasha. You know that you're life is very important. If there something you want to ask, just ask and seek answers to God. If you feel that no one is around, just pray and you would someone to talk to.
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