Without You

True feelings

You were never
Any good for me,
You only
Brought me down
Into your
World of sin
Where all the wrong
Seemed right;
But without you
I'm in a better place;
Life feels like
Its worth living again

Author's Note

Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[mhaie]

You mean, having away that person with seems you became feels right?

[Tasha]

Yes

[mhaie]

Well, whatever the reason is, I'm sure there's something in that person whom you'll miss someday.

[Tasha]

Yea, thank you

[mhaie]

you're always welcome

[Tasha]

As always I appreciate it

[mhaie]

:)

[Tasha]

:)

[Larrycall]

beautiful !

[Tasha]

Thanks!

[Tavionna]

Still loving this dark emotion. You are a great role model to me! this poem tells me how to move on with life. =)

[Tasha]

I'm glad I could help. Thanks for the review.

[Tavionna]

your welcome =)

[Tasha]

:)

[Tavionna]

=)

[Tasha]

(:

[Layla Night]

I am sorry for your pain. No one should have to be with someone who brings them down.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much. It really means a lot.

[s y e]

Awwww, I'm sorry this happened to you Hun, you deserve better!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much it really means a lot.

[s y e]

No worries

[Tasha]

:) I appreciate it

[s y e]

It's just the truth. :-)

[Tasha]

Thannk you for the truth :-)

[s y e]

:-D No problem

[Tasha]

:-) cute shoe pic

[s y e]

Thanks! :-D

[Tasha]

No problem

[quinfinn]

sometimes ugly things come to you in pretty wrapping. when you remove all the pretty packaging it is time to see what you really have...then toss it away before it changes you . well said!

[Tasha]

That is so true Quinn and I see that now. Thanks as always for your review.

[quinfinn]

always a pleasure, my dear one

[Tasha]

You're so sweet

[quinfinn]

as are you....he 's out there...don't give up!

[Tasha]

awww thanks quinn I won't

[realmwriter]

Damn, he must have been an a*****e cause this piece sure doesn't make him sound appealing...! Great write though...!

[Tasha]

Thanks Real, he was a complete a*****e.

[realmwriter]

I am sorry that you ever had to meat him...! My condolences on even having to go through ending it...!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much Real I appreciate it. Slowly but surely it will get better.

[realmwriter]

Yes it will. Pain goes away even if it takes a while for it too. But it will get better...!

[Tasha]

I really appreciate it. Hopefully sooner than later

[realmwriter]

I'll pray for you...!

[Tasha]

Thank you, I'll need it.

[realmwriter]

You're welcome. And have an awesome day...! :)

[Tasha]

Thank you. I am actually.

[Cole Hayley]

Short and sweet, great work

[Tasha]

Thank you!

[esperanza]

Nice

[Tasha]

Thanks

[esperanza]

Your welcome

[Tasha]

:)

[esperanza]

:)

[biggsteve]

dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

[Tasha]

What?

[biggsteve]

u sexy

[Tasha]

oh

[biggsteve]

nope

[Tasha]

huh?

[biggsteve]

nevermind

[Tasha]

ok

[eldogg870]

wyd

[Tasha]

shopping

[biggsteve]

me to

[eldogg870]

so ima a*****e

[Tasha]

huh?

[eldogg870]

then who was that poem about

[Tasha]

someone else

[biggsteve]

who

[biggsteve]

becca garcia

[Tasha]

it doesn't matter

[eldogg870]

ok ima find out

[Tasha]

find what out?

[eldogg870]

mothing babey

[Tasha]

aren't u the brother?

[biggsteve]

no he at work

[Tasha]

oh ok

[biggsteve]

yea

[Tasha]

yep

[biggsteve]

kkkkkkkkkkk

[Tasha]

k

[eldogg870]

k

[Tasha]

k

[biggsteve]

yea

[Tasha]

yup