Peace

Sorry its been a while

Troubles of the world
Seem to be at
The forefront of
People's minds
The topic
Of conversation
But we need
To see the beauty
Of it all
Of what life can do
So peace be still

Author's Note

Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[DriDri]

"We need to see the beauty of it all" I love the way you phrased that, that line really stuck out to me, well done girl !

[Tasha]

Thanks so much for reading girl!

[bryandc15]

This is a short yet wholesome piece..... It's very inspiring ..... keep penning my friend:) oh yeah .... my favorite line is 'So peace be still' ..

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is lovely 'peace be still' something we all have to learn from time to time. Nice write

[Tasha]

Thank you.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Tasha]

:)

[.......]

oh this is so wonderful and inspiring

[Tasha]

Oh why thank you

[.......]

you are so welcome : )

[icelandicblue]

Stillness is the canvas that waits for us to paint the beauty we see and feel.
This is a lovely poem.

[Tasha]

Thank you, that was beautiful.

[Krystal Nicole]

short but beautiful. Very good:)

[Tasha]

Thank you

[Joshua Lean]

Beautiful.

[Tasha]

Thank you.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Agree with your observation here.

[Tasha]

Thank you Kenneth :)

[Tavionna]

True very true, all of this is very true.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[Tavionna]

welcome=)

[Tasha]

;)

[Tavionna]

=)

[Tasha]

:)

[Ama May Cooper]

Honestly im not to keen on this piece, it seems choppy nad lacks of alot of flow but on the other hand it is a nice and powerful message. One written with true honesty in mind and from a pure heart.

[Tasha]

I appreciate your review. I agree there is some choppiness but that was on my mind. Thanks again.