Dirty Flower

Hmm just felt like writing.

A lonely one
that keeps to herself
talks to no one
but its by choice
I may not be the prettiest flower
But I am me
I admit I've got some
Dirt on me
But its because of scars
That have yet
To be mended
Time,
Time you can't reset
Things you can't
Take back
A dirty flower
Sits alone
Waiting to be
Washed away
Of the pain

Author's Note

I know this is really different for me but just wanted to know your opinion. Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[runningturtle87]

Scars are the adornments we bring to the table, to the negotiation, the bedroom. They speak of experience, wisdom, and self-acceptance. Who doesn't have a few? Would you trust them? And then there is the rain...you bring up very intimate threads....

[Tasha]

Thank you very much

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a lovely written piece. I can relate to this as well. Scars just damage the heart and make you feel as if you are alone, but you are never alone. There are people in the world that may have the same background, but everyone has scars. The dirty flower really was symbolic to me. I enjoyed reading this. I agree with Michael. You are beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Michael Thrower]

This poem is beautiful and so are you. Really. It's sad, but at the same time humble.

[Tasha]

Wow. Thank you very much.

[.Lost Soul.]

I liked it!
"I admit I've got some
Dirt on me"
Everybody has got dirt on them. It's human nature. Even the most perfect inspiration for you want to be has some.
Nice write :)
90/100

[Tasha]

Thank you very much :)

[Tavionna]

You know this is basically my personality if you met me in person. Awesome poem it really reminds me of my own self. =)

[Tasha]

Thank you. :)

[Tavionna]

your welcome =)

[Tasha]

:)

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This is pretty good, like the metaphor, this is truthful as well.

[Tasha]

Thank you

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N/P

[Tasha]

:)

[N!LoC]

if i were to get technical.... the ending was a little abrupt.... wished u could continue more than to just end it there... :-) but otherwise... lovely and DIRTY poem... lol

[Tasha]

Lol thank you, I love your reviews.

[disheveledApathy]

What you need is a good watering can, voila! No more dirty flower . . . Fantastic poem, I think we're all flowers, some hiding in the shadows as our leaves wither, and other facing the sun and steadfastly growing up.
-Mer

[biggsteve]

i love it

[Tasha]

Thanks you

[biggsteve]

your welcome gorgeous

[Tasha]

aww thank you again

[biggsteve]

ur welcome

[Tasha]

:)

[biggsteve]

whats that

[Tasha]

a smiely face

[biggsteve]

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[Tasha]

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[biggsteve]

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[Tasha]

whhhheeerrreee yyyyyooooouuuuu gggoooiiinggg???nn

[***The Lost***]

The emotions in your poem remind me of those of my own. Also, I am also going to spend all year round all the way to senior year in France.

[Tasha]

Congrats for you!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!