Forever

Another spur of the moment.

What I thought
Would be temporary
Seems like it will
Be forever
You are different
Than the rest
And you make
My heart race;
Temporary is not
An option with you
You know what you want,
I know what I want,
What we want
Is each other
And I hope we can
Last forever

Author's Note

I seem to be writing a lot of these lately.

Reviews

[Phillitup]

SUGGESTIONS: I have no suggestions for this particular piece. I think you did a wonderful job capturing the true emotions and everything but that step comes next.
EMOTIONS: Again, I think you captured everything well. Spur of the moment poems create the most magical of moments using emotions. Truly magical.
COMMENTS; No real comments. Honestly right now I am drawing a blank on what to say about this poem. It's awesome. Magnificently written. Nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

[Tasha]

Wow, thank you so much Dell. That means a lot coming from you, I really appreciate it.

[Phillitup]

Anytime.

[Tasha]

:)

[Dream Weaver]

Nothing last forever try as we might
it's what you do from the beginning to the
end is what really counts...Nicely done!

[Tasha]

That is true! Thank you very much for the review!

[Dream Weaver]

Absolutely welcome :)

[Tasha]

Thanks :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Beautiful and amazingly sweet. I can feel the love and warmth.

[Tasha]

Thank you, that means a lot.

[Ahmad Cox]

I especially liked this one

[Tasha]

I'm glad you do