Wind

Missed my grandma this morning.

Each breeze is different
Standing in the middle of the garden
Letting each breeze hit me,
How the wind blows through my hair
How as I stand there
There's a cold feeling that
Rushes me over me
But its taken away
By the memories of you
Standing in the middle of the garden,
Your favorite place
Its like you're hugging me
All over again
Patting my shoulder and telling me
Everything will be alright

Reviews

[Phillitup]

"Its like you're hugging me"
While you got the you're correct in this line you neglected the fact that you mean it is so there should be an apostrophe between it and s.

I apologize for the short review. I feel like it all speaks for itself. I think your grandma would love this. How are you missing her? Is she completely gone? If so, I'm sorry. Both of mine are dead. If not, ignore my comment.
Nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

[Tasha]

Its okay, I appreciate your reviews no matter how long or short. Thanks for that correction.

Yes, she died when I was 11...I'm 18 now and it feels like it was just yesterday. I'm sorry for your loss as well. I never knew my grandpa he died 2 weeks before I was born.

Thanks again Dell!

[Phillitup]

My grandpa (I still have one left) died before I was born as well. My grams died when I was six and my nana died when I was nine.

[Tasha]

Aww I'm sorry. We continue to live through them.

[Phillitup]

Truly

[Tasha]

Yes

[quinfinn]

you have done a wonderful and personally beloved thing here by giving the wind a persona....this is both gripping and touching...excellent write. Tasha, you are three times the poet you were a year ago!

[Tasha]

Thank you so much Quin!! That means so much. I'm glad you think that about my writing! :)

[KAOlmsted]

What a sweet tribute to your grandmother...she would be proud of this.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much I appreciate that.

[Revolutionary]

so sweet a memory.I often remember my grandfather when working in the garden

[Tasha]

Thank you very much. That's how I remember my grandma.

[AYVID N]

And what a beautiful way to miss her. I am all admiration for your youthful talent and promise. Kep writing and sharing Tasha!

[Tasha]

Awe thank you so much!

[Everett DeValle]

This is Beautiful Tasha...Wow...I truly believe in spirits, and when you think of it and feel, a presence is there. Wonderful write.

[Tasha]

Thank you so very much!

[Everett DeValle]

You're welcome, Tasha. :)

[Sarahthirk]

very simple and sweet, yet descriptive. I can see exactly where you are. very well done. i love this. :)

[Tasha]

I'm glad you do :) and thank you!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh this is so sweet and filled with longing. Nice work

[Tasha]

Thanks so much!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Tasha]

:)

[Cherrie Palmer]

As we learn to glean from those we love we are able to carry them with us where ever we travel.

[Tasha]

Thank you so much for those words Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

your poem's are always beautiful just like you and they just keep getting better all the time

[Tasha]

Awe that's so nice of you to say.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very sweet. I am sure your grandmother would appreciate it.

[Tasha]

Thank you. That really means a lot.