You claim you love me
And at first
I believed you,
You use to
Call me your angel
You wrote poems for me
Making me feel like
The luckiest girl in the world
But sadly I discovered
The countless ex's
You had, most of whom
I'm friends with;
But you can't love me
And her, and her
You can't say a song
Is meant for me, and tell
Three other girls the same thing
Liar, liar,
Pants on fire
I thought you really loved me
But I'm just another addition
To your belt loop
wow I can tell you're, to put it lightly, very annoyed with this guy. way to tell him off! It makes me mad when a guy will lead you on then your only like a second choice e.e But I liked the poem, sounded like something you'd actually yell at him (feel free to by the way and tell me f you do;P) Nice job!!
God Bless
Posted 11 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Way to put it lightly but yes. I just might. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Hahaha,I can't say how much I loved this Tasha! I did try to write about the same topic but I never could find the right words. It's funny how guys are like this. They never realize that their lies start to unfold and all of his "angels" no longer want him in their lives. I think writing might be the best revenge because you can tell him off and get away with it. Some guys don't know who they want so they have multiple girlfriends at once. I hope he reads this. The funny part is he'll love it but yet think
it's about some other cheating man hoe. Hehe :) Revenge feels great especially when a guy plays at least four girls. The sad part is when a guy tells every girl that he loves her. He might be older than me but that doesn't mean anything. I know more about love than he does I'm quite sure. His heart is so cold to be doing this. That's why I love writing because it helps get stuff off of my chest. I love the words and raw emotions that you set on fire with your anger. If I would've wrote about this, there'd been a cracked laptop screen. The situation is totally messed up. But hey, we live in a cruel and screwed up world.
"You use to
Call me your angel"--yeah, he's full of crap too. He has called me that a thousand times and to the other girls you mentioned I'm sure too.
"You wrote poems for me"- hasn't he for every breathing girl? ;) he wrote me one for Valentine's Day and it was beautiful, I must say.
"You can't say a song
Is meant for me, and tell
Three other girls he same thing"- my favorite part. You tell him girl! ;) He'll one day realize he's not too smart for us.
Well done! Bravo! Bravo! Cheers for evil revenge! :D
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Hehe yes, I hope he reads it too. I'm actually 4 or 5 months older than him, I admit I fell for ever.. read moreHehe yes, I hope he reads it too. I'm actually 4 or 5 months older than him, I admit I fell for everything and I gave into some stuff I hate to admit. He wrote me beautiful poems for my birthday.
Thanks again girl! Who girl revenge e
11 Years Ago
He's a man w***e and deserves to be put out there too! You're welcome ;D
11 Years Ago
Yeah, I could have put his name, but I'm not that mean.
11 Years Ago
Psssft I am ;)
11 Years Ago
Haha no you're not ;)
11 Years Ago
I know, I know. Haha it's not in my nature to do so. :) but for him, I'll be a b***h. (;
Simple yet comes from within the heart and that's the most important thing!
There is something that makes you keep reading, like you want to discover a new information , but the end is undeniable , no resolution.
I enjoyed reading your poem!
Ah yes...The WC Players...sad, lonely boys sitting in their mother's basement with a laptop and a bottle of Jergens ;-) Or, worse, pathetic grown men who feel the need to prey on the vulnerable. But you know, it is not exclusive to the gender...there are women players, too. Good write, this. I'm glad you got it off your chest.
-kimmer
Posted 11 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Yeah I am too, its crazy the things they do. Thanks for the review.
wow I can tell you're, to put it lightly, very annoyed with this guy. way to tell him off! It makes me mad when a guy will lead you on then your only like a second choice e.e But I liked the poem, sounded like something you'd actually yell at him (feel free to by the way and tell me f you do;P) Nice job!!
God Bless
Posted 11 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Way to put it lightly but yes. I just might. Thanks for taking the time to review.
*BRAVO*- yes there are a bunch of players out there. Just have to look the other way. Sad thing is they don't care who they hurt. I try to tend to stay away from those who build you up just to let you down. I know a snow job before it hits. Love this rant, awesome write Girl !
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, and to think this would be the last place to find them. Thanks again girl!
11 Years Ago
no problem, there are these kinds of men everywhere. Some are just, well how do i say this lightly, .. read moreno problem, there are these kinds of men everywhere. Some are just, well how do i say this lightly, well kind of skum... : ) have a wonderful weekend. Avoid idiots if you can. ((HUGS))
11 Years Ago
(HUGS) I will avoid them as best as I can...sadly I'm a magnet for them. You have a great weekend as.. read more(HUGS) I will avoid them as best as I can...sadly I'm a magnet for them. You have a great weekend as well.
11 Years Ago
sorry about the a-holes that do that to you. It's not right. I wonder what they would do if a woman .. read moresorry about the a-holes that do that to you. It's not right. I wonder what they would do if a woman would react to it, probably run away scared to death.
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