Liar Liar

For all those players on here

You claim you love me
And at first
I believed you,
You use to
Call me your angel
You wrote poems for me
Making me feel like
The luckiest girl in the world
But sadly I discovered
The countless ex's
You had, most of whom
I'm friends with;
But you can't love me
And her, and her
You can't say a song
Is meant for me, and tell
Three other girls the same thing
Liar, liar,
Pants on fire
I thought you really loved me
But I'm just another addition
To your belt loop



12/28/2012

Author's Note

Had to get this off my chest.

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

wow I can tell you're, to put it lightly, very annoyed with this guy. way to tell him off! It makes me mad when a guy will lead you on then your only like a second choice e.e But I liked the poem, sounded like something you'd actually yell at him (feel free to by the way and tell me f you do;P) Nice job!!
God Bless

[Tasha]

Way to put it lightly but yes. I just might. Thanks for taking the time to review.

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem

[Tasha]

:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[Frieda P]

Good rant! Who of us haven't written one of these? I hate liars, especially when they break my heart! Hope it helped to get that off your chest... Nice work.

[Tasha]

Thank you Frieda, I felt a whole lot better after writing this. Thanks again!

[Ahmad Cox]

Hug. I am sorry you had to go through this but I am glad you eventually found out the truth,

[Tasha]

Hugs you. I am too but better late than never right?

[Astrid Wanye]

Along with all of the rest of the reviews, great way to get this off your chest! It drives me insane when guys lead you on with lie after lie- great way to put it into perspective- loved the liar liar pants on fire XD

[Tasha]

Thank you very much for taking the time to review I really appreciate it.

[RoxelanasDream]

Wow. It's really heartbreaking for a person who means it when they say "i love you", but another person who doesn't even understand the meaning behind those words. For them it's merely words. When words can be so entirely more powerful than a replacement as lies.

[Tasha]

That is so true, thanks for the review.

[LA Lorena]

get it off your chest, but keep it fresh in your mind for the next moron who comes along. believe in yourself. there are so many worthwhile people out there. go slowly and tread carefully, only fools rush in. players play. no two ways about it. doesn't mean you have to play along.

[Tasha]

It is, thank you so much for the advice L.A.

[what-the-frick]

Well done!

[Tasha]

Thanks so much

[Carolann Dowsett]

The truth behind the lies. I love it

[Tasha]

Thank you very much

[Brittany Zedalis]

Some guys are just awful. Pay them no attention because you can do better.
A great read!
:)

[Tasha]

Thank you very much Brittany, I really appreciate it.

[paparapapa]

"But you can't love me
And her, and her "

Hoho. I'm imagining you yelling at him and pointing harshly at her other girls! It''s good how this is full of raw emotions. You captured the feeling perfectly and turned it into an awesome write. Maybe just add some punctuation marks here and there so that the readers won't be confused of the flow. But all in all, it was really good. :)

[Tasha]

Thank you very much, I will fix it later.

[paparapapa]

You're welcome. :)

[Tasha]

:)

[DC Gentleman]

let it out sis!!!.. Love it@

[Tasha]

Thanks DC haven't seen you in forever :)

[Tasha]

Thank you DC, haven't seen you in a while. :)