Mystery Guy

Mystery Guy

A Poem by Tasha
"

Today's encounter.

"
Seats reassigned,
I'm now beside you
You look at me
But don't say a word,

Black hair,
Skinny jeans,
Chains attached to
The belt loop 
To me you seem
Pretty unapproachable
But looks can be surprising;

You tap my shoulder 
And ask
"What do you think of this?"
I say its adorable
Who would have thought
It would be a cute little puppy
Needing a place to call home

You tell me you want
To have an animal hospital
I say that's something 
We need in the world;

Back to work
I go
Working on this
Psychology
You tap my shoulder
Once more
Asking my opinion
Of this one

I tell you what I think
And you just look
Into my eyes
I'm stuck on your gaze
I can't even focus

Shaking it off
I work some more
Maybe tomorrow
Won't be such a mystery
Hopefully I'll even
Catch your name 

© 2012 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I'm taking psychology online and I sit in a classroom with other people taking classes online. This was what happened today...may not be that good but what do you think? I'd love your feedback.

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Oh I just love that feeling when you see someone, and they see you, and it's like...are we flirting? Are we just talking? Are we about to do something? That mystery is what keeps us enthralled. Then...cut to eleven years later when you're sitting across from him thinking 'if he doesn't start chewing with his mouth closed I swear to God I will stab him in the eye...' *laugh* Hang onto the mystery a while longer ;-)

-kimmer

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

I will, thank you very much kimmer. I am trying to hold on to the mystery.



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You have written a wonderful piece.
Great assignment on love related to psychology.
You have an amazing guide,Ashley Rivers.
So,don't worry.
Cheers!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

Yea, thank you so much again.
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

hehe :)
well, this is fitting inspiration in psychology...now all you need is chemistry..nice subject matter to write on...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much...I hope all works out. I'll write more about it tomorrow. Thanks again.
Its very very nice!...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

Thank you very very much Kunal, appreciate it.
Kunal Tandon

11 Years Ago

Any time!..
And do tell me about what happened next :)
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

I will! Don't worry :)
it was really good :}

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review! :)
I really love this, Tasha without a doubt! I hope you get his name by tomorrow. I think you done an excellent job, so stop dissing on yourself. Maybe God's keeping some of this guy's life a mystery for you to slowly unravel the truth about this guy before falling for him completely. I love poetry that's based on real stories. I can close my eyes and imagine you two talking to each other, that's how wonderful your imagery is approached in this poem. With the whole seats arrangement, maybe that was done on purpose by God! God for sure works his mysterious ways for either a good or bad way. In your case, he's turning you onto a path for a possible guy in your life. Keep writing! :)

"Maybe tomorrow
Won't be such a mystery
Hopefully I'll even
Catch your name"--Beautiful! But life wouldn't feel right without suprises ;)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, yeah. :)
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

:)
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

:)

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