I'm taking psychology online and I sit in a classroom with other people taking classes online. This was what happened today...may not be that good but what do you think? I'd love your feedback.
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Oh I just love that feeling when you see someone, and they see you, and it's like...are we flirting? Are we just talking? Are we about to do something? That mystery is what keeps us enthralled. Then...cut to eleven years later when you're sitting across from him thinking 'if he doesn't start chewing with his mouth closed I swear to God I will stab him in the eye...' *laugh* Hang onto the mystery a while longer ;-)
-kimmer
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I will, thank you very much kimmer. I am trying to hold on to the mystery.
You have written a wonderful piece.
Great assignment on love related to psychology.
You have an amazing guide,Ashley Rivers.
So,don't worry.
Cheers!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Zainul, and you're right Ashley is a terrific guide. Thanks again for the review. Muc.. read moreThanks so much Zainul, and you're right Ashley is a terrific guide. Thanks again for the review. Much appreciated.
11 Years Ago
I adore Ashley.
She may be an international love consultant.
I really love this, Tasha without a doubt! I hope you get his name by tomorrow. I think you done an excellent job, so stop dissing on yourself. Maybe God's keeping some of this guy's life a mystery for you to slowly unravel the truth about this guy before falling for him completely. I love poetry that's based on real stories. I can close my eyes and imagine you two talking to each other, that's how wonderful your imagery is approached in this poem. With the whole seats arrangement, maybe that was done on purpose by God! God for sure works his mysterious ways for either a good or bad way. In your case, he's turning you onto a path for a possible guy in your life. Keep writing! :)
"Maybe tomorrow
Won't be such a mystery
Hopefully I'll even
Catch your name"--Beautiful! But life wouldn't feel right without suprises ;)
Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much Ashley! I will stop dissing myself. I don't know, that may be possible. Thanks a.. read moreThank you very much Ashley! I will stop dissing myself. I don't know, that may be possible. Thanks again Ashley, I will. And if I get his name I'll more than likely write about it. I really appreciate your review.
11 Years Ago
You're more than welcome, Tasha! Anytime that you need something read or reviewed, I'm here for you .. read moreYou're more than welcome, Tasha! Anytime that you need something read or reviewed, I'm here for you girl! :) That's good, when you stop being negative he'll see that positive and great person that you are! I can't wait for you write about it too.
11 Years Ago
That is good to know!! :) That was nice of you. And after that class was over I felt at peace. I wil.. read moreThat is good to know!! :) That was nice of you. And after that class was over I felt at peace. I will write about it tomorrow.
11 Years Ago
Haha! I know what you mean. I bet you were nervous in a way. I would've been too. I'm a shy girl (:
11 Years Ago
I was nervous. I'm a shy girl too. Haha the funny thing is that's what I'm studying in psychology ri.. read moreI was nervous. I'm a shy girl too. Haha the funny thing is that's what I'm studying in psychology right now...shyness and stuff like that.
11 Years Ago
Haha aww! Was he that cute? :D Oh well I should definitely read on some of that. I hate that I blush.. read moreHaha aww! Was he that cute? :D Oh well I should definitely read on some of that. I hate that I blush so much whenever I see a cute guy or get embarrassed. >:/ urgh! Haha
11 Years Ago
Haha he was. I'm that way too. And if he wasn't I don't think I would be writing about it. :D
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