Looking Back

Three word challenge: clouds, snow, street

Puffy clouds,

Darker skies,

Look up

It looks like rain

But its the first

Snow fall of the season;

It gets heavier

Covering the street

I walk on to meet you

Looking back

Trying to impress

So glad I beared

The snow to see you

So happy I met you

There was never

Shame in my heart 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Again another sweet and soft love poem. I could feel the subtle longing to connect even if it meant being in the snow or bearing the elements,

[Tasha]

Aww why thank you very much that means a lot.

[teardrop]

Very nicely written and expressed : )

[Tasha]

Thanks :)

[J]

I liked it. Plain simple but spoke so many words. Good job :)

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[elizasexybeth]

there was never shame in my heart a strong statement which I beleive in

[Tasha]

Thank you for the review

[Tai Ryens]

Reminiscing? Nonetheless, fine concept you've at your disposal. Well done.

[Tasha]

I guess I was. Thank you very much.

[Mauricio Montoya]

looking back, indecision, no excuses, in the end it all work out, no shame.
Nice work.

[Tasha]

Thank you.