It was an alright piece. The flow was weird. Like it was enjoyable, but it felt off. Mainly because the stanzas were finished a line down.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Lol yes I am.
Thank you Dracula, I don't know why I have started writing that way, I d.. read moreLol yes I am.
Thank you Dracula, I don't know why I have started writing that way, I don't like it. It is something I need to work on, thank you so much for the review its greatly appreciated. And yes I do protect the things I love.
12 Years Ago
It's no prob really.
and it's nice to be a "lil" protective. I'm that way. I am sooo .. read moreIt's no prob really.
and it's nice to be a "lil" protective. I'm that way. I am sooo glad "new guy" moved. I'm sorry my gf lost a freind but it was still in the back of me head. All the what ifs, and what not.
Hey, I'm 18 years old and I love writing.
"To know me is to love me"
"Every heart has a beat and mine just skips for you"
Wanna know more? Message me I love to make new friends.
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