Love Me

I am yours

And yours alone

I'm the door

And you're the key 

Now hurry up

And enter me 

Love me forever

And I'll love you forever 

Author's Note

A little mature for me, but hey I'm 18...YOLO...haha. Anyway thanks if you review.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha awwh such a funny and sweet poem, Tasha! You're right YOLO! Lol. We do only live once so might as well live it to the fullest, even if that means to write mature writings! ;D I could relate and agree with your poem until I read that sixth line. I have to admit it made me laugh a little bit since I really didn't see that coming. You do have a way with words and they move your audience emotionally. So powerful with such bliss!

"I am yours
And yours alone"--Most people say that to each other while in a relationship because it makes their significant other feel more secure and happier with them. It's also sweet to say!

"I'm the door
And you're the key
And enter me"--Those lines seem to fit and go very well together, I must correctly say.

"Love me forever
And I'll love you forever." --Pure excellence and beauty. Lines of bittersweet love!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Phillitup]

I find that maturity doesn't have an age, merely a mind set. Also, interpretation assumes the biggest role in comfort zone. Honestly, this poem is fine. Of course, that's depending on the aforementioned maturity and interpretation. Poems like this can be viewed in so many ways that it's not even in the least bit funny. A couple things:

1) Simplicity and length catch a readers eye. Some like reading epic poems instead of short ones like this and all of the ones I write. Personally, I'm not a big fan of reading for long amounts of time (mainly poetry). I stand up at the laptop I'm on so it drives me insane and takes away my attention span. Others, like me, like the short and sweet, simple yet complicated, mystery filled ones. It's just better to have more direct preferences.

2) I force myself to interpret it in a different way then you do. I know what you mean however, if you see it from my direction it's quite harmless. You can see it as the key to your heart.

3) Overall, with serious consideration, this is a good write. You should be proud of yourself. Take this review seriously (it took me some time to write it.)

Best regards,

Dell

[Tasha]

Thank you very much Dell. To be my shorest poem it too me the longest time to write.
I get easily distracted to so that's why I only do poetry.
Haha I'm glad someone read it differently.
I'm commenting from my phone so its even harder not to get distracted. Thank you very mu h again!!

[Phillitup]

:)

[Tasha]

:) thanks again!

[biggsteve]

i like all you r poems

[Tasha]

well thank u!!

[biggsteve]

u welcome

[Tasha]

:)

[biggsteve]

[Tasha]

Huh?

[biggsteve]

nun

[Tasha]

Ok

[biggsteve]

yea








yea

[Tasha]

What's that inbetween?

[biggsteve]

nun ull figure it it out

[Tasha]

Okay

[That_Girl]

Short but very sweet and tempting. Nice!

[Tasha]

Thanks hmm tempting in a good or bad way?

[That_Girl]

Oh good good. :) Men would love it haha

Well, maybe a bad way.... depends on how you view that lol

[Tasha]

Haha I'm legal now...it doesn't matter. Lol :)

[That_Girl]

lmao depending on the state, you have may have been legal a year ago. xD

[Tasha]

Lmao no ohh well then nc..about 2 months xd

[KAOlmsted]

First...my eyebrows went *shwing* up my forehead at that 6th line ;-) *laugh*

Second...wtf is YOLO?

Third...I love short and sweet, and this was both...well done.

(p.s. how's the chain guy from the psych class; the guy who draws puppies...???)

:-D

[That_Girl]

Only the most overused expression at the moment.. You Only Live Once. Bugs the hell out of me lol

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.
I never said he drew puppies...its going really well, he gave me his jacket because I was cold :)

[Tasha]

@Avy YOLO annoys the hell out of me me too, I couldn't think of a word to say.

[That_Girl]

lmao "I'm young and I say f**k it!" ;) hahaha

[Tasha]

Haha clever but I didn't want to sound like a b***h ;) hahaha a

[That_Girl]

Ouch! ;) kidding lol

[Tasha]

Aww lol did I hurt your feelings?

[That_Girl]

Haha nooooo. I was just messing. :)

[KAOlmsted]

"You tap my shoulder
And ask
"What do you think of this?"
I say its adorable
read more"You tap my shoulder
And ask
"What do you think of this?"
I say its adorable
Who would have thought
It would be a cute little puppy
Needing a place to call home"

*laugh* I thought you meant he drew a puppy...I really am f*****g senile, kids :-D

[Tasha]

Haha no, I should have been more clear he showed me a picture of the puppy.
I'm sorry I confused you.

[That_Girl]

HAHA I had thought she was referring to HIM as the puppy. *facepalm*

[Tasha]

Haha its okay.

[Tasha]

Haha I know, I could still use a lesson though.

[KeeD]

Hope you find the right person to share the key with and have a happily ever after :) good write, short sweet n simple.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much, I hope so to.

[MystiqFairy]

I really like the way you word your poem. It's short but I completely understand it because it's full of emotion.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much for taking the time to review!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much!

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

The bittersweetness of this poem is so beautiful.
It lingers.
Great write!

[Tasha]

Thanks so much for the review.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Short but oh so sweet :)

[Tasha]

Thank you very much John :)

[Craba]

I love this, awesome write.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much!

[Kaylor Mason]

That's desperately clever! I love that whole "I am the door, you are the key" thing--it's just very cool

[Tasha]

Thank you very much for the review! :)