Love Me

I am yours

And yours alone

I'm the door

And you're the key 

Now hurry up

And enter me 

Love me forever

And I'll love you forever 

Author's Note

A little mature for me, but hey I'm 18...YOLO...haha. Anyway thanks if you review.

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha awwh such a funny and sweet poem, Tasha! You're right YOLO! Lol. We do only live once so might as well live it to the fullest, even if that means to write mature writings! ;D I could relate and agree with your poem until I read that sixth line. I have to admit it made me laugh a little bit since I really didn't see that coming. You do have a way with words and they move your audience emotionally. So powerful with such bliss!

"I am yours
And yours alone"--Most people say that to each other while in a relationship because it makes their significant other feel more secure and happier with them. It's also sweet to say!

"I'm the door
And you're the key
And enter me"--Those lines seem to fit and go very well together, I must correctly say.

"Love me forever
And I'll love you forever." --Pure excellence and beauty. Lines of bittersweet love!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Sirius King]

short n sweet but packs a mighty punch,,,i really like this!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much!

[Sirius King]

np :-)

[Tasha]

:)

[quinfinn]

you have awakened the manbeast in me, but i feel a soft and delicate urge just to hold you thru the night. excellent projection of the thoughts and feelings of innocent attraction. you are a beautiful soul. your poetry sings ......

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. It hinder on erotic. But a good writer can dance on the edge and allow the reader to use thoughts and vision. You did. No weakness in the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Tasha]

Thank you very much Coyote, I really appreciate it.

[charlotte talley]

cute little poem. I like it when you said I am the door, and ke's the key. ok key to your heart. keep it up.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very mature way of composing a love poem. I like it.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[Frieda P]

Naughty girl :)

hey, you're 18 you earned it.

[Tasha]

I guess I can :)

Thank you very much Fieda

[}Echo{]

This is short and sweet. I really like this. Nice write. :)

[Tasha]

Thanks very much, I really appreciate it.

[}Echo{]

:)

[Tasha]

:)

[biggsteve]

i like that poem

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[biggsteve]

ur welcome beautiful

[Tasha]

Aww thank you :)

[biggsteve]

ur welcome honey

[Tasha]

Ur so sweet

[biggsteve]

ur sweeter

[Tasha]

well thank u

[biggsteve]

okay honey

[Tasha]

yeah :)

[biggsteve]

okay

[Tasha]

Yes

[biggsteve]

:)3

[Tasha]

[biggsteve]

huh

[Tasha]

It was suppose to be a heart

[biggsteve]

[Tasha]

What?

[biggsteve]

IT MEANS THAT ILY

[Tasha]

Oh well thanks

[biggsteve]

UR WELCOME

[Tasha]

Ur so incredibly sweet

[biggsteve]

i know

[Tasha]

You really are

[biggsteve]

i am for real

[Tasha]

I can tell

[biggsteve]

i see

[Tasha]

Yea :)

[biggsteve]

okay

[Tasha]

Haha yeah

[biggsteve]

whats funny

[Tasha]

Nothing

[biggsteve]

oh okay

[Tasha]

Yeah

[biggsteve]

k

[Tasha]

K

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Hey, this was a great write. I can feel the love within it. Is it about the mystery guy? I mean I think you should go for it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Tasha]

Hey, thank you. Funny thing is I wrote this before I ever noticed him.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

o.o

[Tasha]

Haha yeah it can be about him.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Rawr!

[Tasha]

Hehe grrr!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

:)

[Tasha]

:)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Mew!

[Tasha]

Woof!!

[biggsteve]

ok yall a mess

[Tasha]

Haha you can say that

[biggsteve]

i know yall are

[Tasha]

Yeah its kinda our thing

[biggsteve]

i see that

[Tasha]

Haha its what we're best at

[biggsteve]

[Tasha]

Another heart?

[biggsteve]

yep but ill stop em tho

[biggsteve]

yea i stop them

[Tasha]

What if I don't want you too

[biggsteve]

ok

[Tasha]

Yeah

[Angie Diane♥♥]

...mew.....

[Tasha]

..meow..

[biggsteve]

ribbit

[Tasha]

baaa

[biggsteve]

ribbit ribbit

[Tasha]

buzz

[biggsteve]

chirp chirp

[Tasha]

gulp gulp

[biggsteve]

quack quack

[Tasha]

moo moo

[biggsteve]

sting

[Tasha]

you win

[biggsteve]

you lose

[Tasha]

yes I lose

[biggsteve]

beez

[Tasha]

Ohh you still win

[biggsteve]

u let me win

[Tasha]

no I didn't

[biggsteve]

okay

[Tasha]

What makes you think I did

[biggsteve]

i dont know

[Angie Diane♥♥]

what .-.

[Tasha]

Ok

[Tasha]

Haha idk either Angie

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Okay .-.

[Tasha]

Yeah :/

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Lol I love how my review was blown up....

[Tasha]

Haha all because of animal sounds...

[biggsteve]

i know

[Tasha]

Haha yeah

[Angie Diane♥♥]

yuo.

[Tasha]

Yeah