My Completion

My Completion

A Poem by Tasha
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Comes from the heart <3

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Whatever I have been
Searching for
I've found it in you
You are my heart
And you are my joy
You are my completion;
You're sweet
With a touch of honey
From your words
And complements
You are the key
To my heart,
The missing piece
To my puzzle,
Baby you complete me
As I complete you
You are my completion 

♥♥♥

© 2012 Tasha


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 Tasha
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Hi Tasha
This is so pure, a very elegent truth that counts under the law of natural love. The sculpture that you, aimed to make is so beautifully carved and painted with you words that, it seems to be as a pleasent monsoon to the younge, adorable and loving hearts.

What a beautifull, composed and easily flowing writting. Simple yet elegant.

Keep up the great write.

Regards
Prodical

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

12 Years Ago

Hi Prodicalife

Aww that was so nice of you to say. You totally made my night!
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prodicallife

12 Years Ago

Pleasure

Regards
Prodical
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

Thanks again! :)



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Awww These words are so touching and the Sentiment Enchanting!!! a Truly remarkable piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

12 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it!! :)
Jordan's Back

12 Years Ago

i did allot. :)
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

good :)
Hi Tasha
This is so pure, a very elegent truth that counts under the law of natural love. The sculpture that you, aimed to make is so beautifully carved and painted with you words that, it seems to be as a pleasent monsoon to the younge, adorable and loving hearts.

What a beautifull, composed and easily flowing writting. Simple yet elegant.

Keep up the great write.

Regards
Prodical

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

12 Years Ago

Hi Prodicalife

Aww that was so nice of you to say. You totally made my night!
read more
prodicallife

12 Years Ago

Pleasure

Regards
Prodical
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

Thanks again! :)
I love this(: I definitely think a lot of people can relate, including me, to having that one person who just seems like is meant to be with you, was made for you.

I really like this part:

"You are the key
To my heart,
The missing piece
To my puzzle,
Baby you complete me
As I complete you
You are my completion"

This is a very beautiful poem, and you did a great job of letting your feelings shine through to the reader. Sounds like you guys really belong together(: good luck with that, great write, and thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

12 Years Ago

:) Yeah its so fun!
Amandaaa Caroline (:

12 Years Ago

It is, makes you feel like you're living a dream(: hahahaha, that's actually what I wrote my last po.. read more
 Tasha

12 Years Ago

I feel like that too! It's crazy that I'm this happy. :)

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