Wasting Away

Eh.

I've written a thousand

Songs for you

All expressing

How I feel

Yet I get no note

From you

Why is it?

Tell me am I 

Wasting away or

Should I stay?

You're so hypnotizing

You've got me laughing

While I sing,

Crying while I'm 

Away from you,

Don't you see

I'm wasting away

Your love's got me

Unraveling,

Baby why won't you

Sing for me? 

Author's Note

Pretty random.

Reviews

[A love for poetry]

Ahh, I know these feelings all too well! It's basically sentimentality at it's finest. So I think you have been able to capture it really well here, because love, happiness, sadness is all the same, emotions! And you are absolutely right, emotions of these sorts are felt and seen as random. And the title fits really well, because in turn, emotions make people waste away... so great writing here Tash!

[Tasha]

Thanks so much Isaac

[quinfinn]

seems to speak for many of us in what i like to call undefined love...unrequited seems so cliche, but that fits here as well. wonderfully penned and creative verse. and i love the last four lines! reminded me (vaguely) of Marc Antony's "you sang to me" well done! i certainly felt your "music"

[Tasha]

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it. I've never heard that song before but I will have to listen to it.

[quinfinn]

i think you will recognize it immediately, keep up the great writing!

[Maila]

Unrequited love is the most painful, yet it makes us stronger ultimately.

[Tasha]

Thank you so much, I appreciate it.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

It's always so sad when someone else doesn't feel the same way we do. It really DOES feel like we're wasting time without a concrete answer. Nice one.

Pendragon

[Tasha]

Thank you so much Pendragon.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

No problem.

[Tasha]

:)

[Jason]

Great poem. I like it.

[Tasha]

I'm glad you like it, thanks Jason.

[NathanBlackie]

I can relate to this poem... I like it. good work.

[Tasha]

I'm glad you like it Nathan. Thanks for the review.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice title, and very nice emotion. Enjoyed that in this poem as well as this part:
"Don't you see
I'm wasting away
Your love's got me
Unraveling,"

[Tasha]

Thank you so much for the review Victoria, I appreciate it.