Did You Know?

Kind of random.

Did you know

I care more

about you

then you know

I try my best

to look out

for you

but did 

you know?

you are

unlike the 

others,

there's something

about you

did you know

that you

warm my heart

every time you

smile;

you are so

wonderful,

I have to ask

do you know?

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

i like this a lot! i like your stanza structure it's different and i think everybody should have their own style even when it comes to something as formal as writing and poetry! i have that conversation all the time in my head. do they know? i just never got the guts to ask anyone :( i'm working on that. anyways enough about me, more about you. your a great writer keep doing what you do girl :)

[Tasha]

Thank you very much girl :)

[beautiful dreamer]

lol! best response ever! ican't believe i just saw this now! you made my day :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

What the others said, I agree with. Just space it into stanzas.

Again, just my preference.

[Tasha]

I will, thanks for the review.

[Stanley Wilson]

really clever use of emotion flowed really well

[Tasha]

Thank you so much!

[rnuff]

This is so wonderful and kind.

[Tasha]

Thanks

[Pax]

very sweet...i like it...good job..

[Tasha]

Thank you!