No Control

Old feelings.

I can't believe

What I have done,

Someone has to know

I have no control

Over my actions

I guess that's what

Love does;

Love makes me crazy,

Love makes me blind

Love makes me loose

Sight of myself

Love makes me

So impaired 

That I have

No control 

Author's Note

Enjoy. What do you think?

Reviews

[Writer #00]

For a bit I thought this was a dissociative identity homicide poem; then I read more and realized "Oh. This is much more seemingly innocent than first I interpreted." Great piece of writing. I love (no pun intended) how you managed to evoke a feeling of caution and blissful immobilization.

+++/100

[Tasha]

Thank you very much. I love your reviews and I will review back soon.

[Writer #00]

You're welcome. You're a great poet.

[Tasha]

That means so much.

[Krystal Nicole]

very good write!!

[Tasha]

Thanks

[sithlordjp]

The repetitions of "Loves makes" are very effective.... They remind us of all the crazy things we do in our pursuit of love, well done!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I could agree. Love makes me blind too. I do things that I wouldn't do for anyone when I'm in love. I am only true to myself when it comes to having sex. I won't give the guy what he wants then, but other than that I would do anything for them. This was a great piece. I can't wait to read more from you. Thanks for sharing.

[Tasha]

I am the exact same way. Thank you for the review. And I will read morefrom you when I get home from work.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Awe, thank you. I will be reviewing you more too. I mean you are reviewing me. :D

[Tasha]

Awe thanks :D

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You are welcome. :3

[Tasha]

:)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

:D

[Mark]

Yeah, love can do that. Emotions can make us lose track of reason. This flows very evenly.
Nice piece.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[Mark]

You're welcome

[Tasha]

:)

[✖Lust✖]

Love it.

[Tasha]

Thank you very much.

[Chantee]

This is a great poem. I can very much relate to this feeling.

[Tasha]

Thanks for the review

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

It has a kind of "harried, spinning" sense to it that really helps with the flow and point of the poem.
It heightens the effect, if you will.
Great write!

[Tasha]

Thanks so much for the review!
Its greatly appreciated.

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

Anytime, my friend.

[Tasha]

Thanks again friend.