Tired

Tired of being

yelled at,

tired of being

mistreated,

its not fair to me

I'm tired 

of it all

and want

it to end

I would like

to rest,

but I can't;

I'm sick and tired

of being

sick and tired

and I want

it to end 

Author's Note

What do you like?

Reviews

[Pax]

"I'm sick and tired
of being
sick and tired"
~the repetition is really sad..that i felt it too.
great job!

[Tasha]

Thanks again for the review Pax!

[Pax]

your welcome my freind...

[Tasha]

I appreciate it friend...

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

I love this. Very relatable, good beat. The vibe and emotion hit you over the head. In a good way.
Great piece.
Keep writing!

[Tasha]

Thank you so much for the review!

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

Anytime

[Tasha]

:)

[Poetic Beauty]

We all have things we are going through in life and leaving this vague is the best way you can do it for it allows the reader to put in their own trouble and understand the poem making it personal to them.

[Tasha]

Thanks for the review Poetic! :)

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Tasha]

:)

[Wakeofahero]

I hope this is just a poem and not how you actually feel! Either or very sad, but I hope whomever this is about cheers up and finds what they love in life cause there is always something out there to make you not so sick and tired :)!

[Tasha]

Aww you are so sweet! Most of it is just a poem. Thank you so much for reading it! :)

[Wakeofahero]

You're welcome too, haha and I'm glad to hear that. I still thought it was good, keep up the good work!

[Tasha]

Thank you! :) I will.