If I Lose You

If you love someone that the world changes if you lose that person read this.

If I lose you...

... The sky will be dark

    The birds will stop singing 

    The flowers will die

    The smile on my face will disappear

If i lose you...

I'll die 

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

You could't have said it better. Someone comes into your life and that person becomes everything for you and you feel that the day the person leaves you, you will die. There have been many instances of people ending their life after losing a loved one. Hope no one goes to that extreme but the thought is appreciated and its a wonderful poem.

*shabeeh*

[Danai]

Thank you for your review

[Shabeeh Haider]

welcome. I have written on a similar topic. Will post it soon