Selfish People

Selfish People

A Poem by Danai

It's funny when some people have everything and won't respect it,
 and some other people have nothing and only want the simple things in life.
 These people aren't born for this place,
 they feel unhappy, unloved, unwanted...

© 2016 Danai


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You have described two types of people here. One has all but is still unhappy. The other are the contented and happy ones who are pleased with whatever they have. I like the simplicity here but feel you could have added a bit more

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Incomplete.

Something's missing.

Perhaps that's the point... even still, I'd add a line.



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Danai

8 Years Ago

I want my poems to put the reader into thoughts and feel what they want to feel and understand it in.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

I feel similarly.

Not entirely though... something's still missing.

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Added on April 19, 2016
Last Updated on April 19, 2016
Tags: #selfish, #inhappy, #unloved, #unwanted, #Danai

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Danai
Danai

Toronto, Canada



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