Look At Me

It's about a young boy that he is looking for love but he can't see that love is next to him

You have a dark side that reminds me of me,

You have a bright side that I wish I could be.

 

You always like the wrong girls that you see,

Open your eyes for once and look at me.

 

You only want someone to love and to be loved,

To care about you and make you happy.

 

But the problem is that the girls you wish,

Can’t make you feel “pleased”.

 

All that I know all that I see is that you need to live,

Forget the problems that you see, the right answer is me.

 

All that I feel is mixed all that I try goes to waste,

They don’t like you can’t you see their afraid of being real and free.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Sometime love can be near and we do see it.
"All that I know all that I see is that you need to live,
Forget the problems that you see, the right answer is me."
I like the honest tone and the wish in the poetry.
Coyote

[Hanan96_5]

This is beautiful.
I love the way you try to address the situation to the young boy.

[Danai]

Thank you :D

[aLittlePain]

I really like this. The tone the feel and the detail, paints an image.

Sincerely honest
"All that I feel is mixed all that I try goes to waste,
They don't like you can't you see their afraid of being real and free".

[Danai]

thank you for your good review

[Shabeeh Haider]

At times you love someone but can be so difficult to get that person to love you. it does hurt when you see the person running to others for love when you know you can give that person all the love that you have. A wonderfully written poem, straight from the heart

[Danai]

The thing is that i have a friend who never been loved by someone and it hurts me to see him sad and unhappy i try to help him but he likes the wrong girls

[Shabeeh Haider]

It is sad to see your friend hurt. Hopefully you can guide him. Do take the time to see my poems. Stay blessed

[Danai]

I will read them :)
the thing is with that friend I try to help him but I can't make the girls love him and when I have something he makes me smile by giving me a small flower that he fineds

[Ria Carol]

its a good poem...understandable :)

[Danai]

Thank you a lot

[Nicholas Shea]

I love the elegance in the frustration you've created here! Wonderful!

[Danai]

Thank you, to be honest, it took me 10 minutes to write this poem because I felt everything I wrote and it was easy to express myself

[Ria Carol]

thats wonderful...often it helps to just write without thinking too much...its come out great :)
read morethats wonderful...often it helps to just write without thinking too much...its come out great :)