Cruel World

It's about a fake world that a lot of people suffer

It's hard to find truth when you live in lies and fake personalities.

 Imagine the world without lies and fake people. 

None will fight, there will be nobody in danger from other people. 

Everybody will stand on the same step and life would be easier. 

But people are selfish and care how they will have fun even if they stab their own friend...

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

Very well written.

But then all the charm might go away too. we all would be like robots. Working like machines.
There's a spelling mistake in first line
You should keep writing its very impressive and thought provoking. Well done

[Danai]

Thank you Usmana

[Usman Muhammad]

Don't mention, Your work is impressive and i will looking forward for your next piece of writing

[Danai]

Thank you, i will read some of your work too

[Usman Muhammad]

i would be very grateful to you if you would read one of mine.

[Danai]

i just started

[Davidgeo]

Outstanding.


"none will fight, nobody in danger of people"

Spectacular.

And I really wanted to be a jerk. You took my fight away with words.... jerk

[Danai]

thank you for your nice words

[Davidgeo]

My pleasure

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn, immense truth in this...and sadness because it is how so many people are....and it deters any chance for peace and love in the entire world...there will always be the selfishness...it's inevitable.

j.

[Hanan96_5]

That is the cold truth. The emotions are captured.

[Antoñyo]

Just love works like this...Real, Courageous, True. Reminds of John Lennon's "Imagine" lyrics (one of the greatest songs ever made...so yeah, I'm stashing this in my favorites).
"nobody in danger of people" ~ Love that wording

Thanks for the 100/100 share!

[Danai]

Thank you s much for your support

[Antoñyo]

You're welcome

[Inject Positivity]

Very true and thoughtful write... This world has indeed become a cruel world, this present has said more lies than any generation ever did... Selfishness has taken place of selflessness... There is no humanity left, everyone is busy to earn the first spot and they can do anything to get their even if that causes killing of their own brothers....

Note: there is an e in the word find in the first line...

It has a very honest and truthful meaning... It flows well too... Well done...

Regards
Dhiman

[Danai]

Thank you for the correction and for your nice words :)

[Inject Positivity]

we are here to help each other my frnd... You are welcome...