untitled.

i'm 

capturing

fleeting moments of mass confusion.

labeling

it "the human race". this is what my insides are

 

doing 

as i glance through you.

you've just realized that i've been

standing

on the top of the universe,

laughing.

its funny because i have just realized i'm terrified of heights.

 

my wet guilt is

dripping

down my forearm as i sink my teeth into it.

the tendons in my wrist are

swelling

as i grasp onto your attention.

 

please don't give up on me

because your honestly all i have left.

 

you don't realize that i've been

crying

in front of you for an eternity.

i don't understand why you haven't been

seeing 

me. i should have thought of
filming

it. i'm sorry.

 

my insides are now

showing

me a sepia-toned image. my hand is

gripping

the back of his neck and i'm 

holding

him close.

 

hairline to hairline;

dust to dust.

 

Reviews

[Kate]

this is really nice.
i like the disjointed structure a lot. it reflects the mood really well!