Saturday

Saturday

A Poem by Dan Morton

I feel pretty
useless today.
Nothing's working
as it should.
My computer
is on strike
and the bus
left without me.

My head aches
from oversleeping.

I think I'll buy
a spade and find
somewhere quiet.
Dig myself a
hole and just
wait.

© 2012 Dan Morton


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Buses and Computers go hand in hand when it comes to letting you down....

I liked this witty write... punchy and funny......

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simplicity at its best!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Everyone knows this feeling all too well. Unless they're a robot. I really liked this one as well. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes all yuo can do is dig a hole. You can either wait for something to fall into it, or you can fall into it yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 19, 2012
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Dan Morton
Dan Morton

Rye, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Dan, I'm a 38 year old (very new) poet, amateur photographer and Buddhist. I live in the U.K. on the south coast, about a stones throw from five miles of unspoilt beach (very inspiring). I.. more..

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