Saturday
A Poem by
Dan Morton
I feel pretty
useless today.
Nothing's working
as it should.
My computer
is on strike
and the bus
left without me.
My head aches
from oversleeping.
I think I'll buy
a spade and find
somewhere quiet.
Dig myself a
hole and just
wait.
© 2012 Dan Morton
Reviews
Buses and Computers go hand in hand when it comes to letting you down....
I liked this witty write... punchy and funny......
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simplicity at its best!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Simplicity at its best!
Everyone knows this feeling all too well. Unless they're a robot. I really liked this one as well. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Everyone knows this feeling all too well. Unless they're a robot. I really liked this one as well. :)
Sometimes all yuo can do is dig a hole. You can either wait for something to fall into it, or you can fall into it yourself.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Sometimes all yuo can do is dig a hole. You can either wait for something to fall into it, or you can fall into it yourself.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 19, 2012
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Author
Dan Morton Rye, East Sussex, United Kingdom
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Hi,
I'm Dan, I'm a 38 year old (very new) poet, amateur photographer and Buddhist. I live in the U.K. on the south coast, about a stones throw from five miles of unspoilt beach (very inspiring). I..
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