Dreamless Night

One of those long nights where you stay up till the sun hits your eyes

Oh how cruel is the night

To keep you up while others sleep tight

Filling your head with plight

Of hopes and dreams that may never take flight

Of past lovers whom you left broken

Preventing you from ever letting love be spoken

Will i ever be free?

From these thoughts that chain me 

Or are my chains only an illusion

That i created from my own contusions 

The key to depart this misery

Is so simple yet still a mystery

All it takes is to let go 

But how can i?

For these thoughts are like ravens

Surrounding me in all my havens

In the chaos of the noise i find myself

Destroyed

Exhausted

Alone

Defeated

Until i see the rays of light

Will i know that everything's alright

Knowing i survived another dreamless night

Author's Note

Please critic with all honesty, thanks.

Reviews

[Grace]

We are told to write a list of jobs needed to be done as well as other things that's on your mind, but it's my experience that it doesn't work. I hope this is not something you are experiencing.
Quite well written. Keep going.

Grace.