Say I (Song)

Say I (Song)

A Poem by Damien Ridge
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New song I made.

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Get on you're boots kid Gotta go to school Gotta go to bruises Always love and hope But then who's this Someone hurt at home Hurt him From the first curse to the first fist He would learn worse But he hurt his Everything he learnt at first cursed him With regret and burning berserking Cause the person that he was Wasn't every thing he'd become, it's ugly From believing in something to nothing Had the key for the lock but it's stuck in Had a dream of a box full of wonders But the demons come out up from under A box of blunts, a box of thunder A bundle of bud and a rock for luck He fucked a blonde and then she fucked his friend What's wrong with sharing he joked and said Now he says He never seen such murder in someone's eyes Her, curled up on her island Thirsty still Spread em wide b***h Houston we have a problem Engines killed, now we're stallin Now we're ballin Shot through the heart Constant loss Robbed of a cause Lost in the dark Calls his mom Not what he thought Gettin too old It's getting too cold out The reflection's testing hope The rest ends, like sentences Sentenced to end it

Say I
Say I
Say I
I was

© 2018 Damien Ridge


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Damien Ridge
Hope you like it :D

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video gone :< was hoping to hear it :

Posted 5 Years Ago


Enjoyed this, this has the feeling of the beat poets, or touches of Howl..street wise and real. Fine job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


You did a outstanding job. The song is very good and the words. Worthwhile and good. Thank you Damien for sharing your work.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Personally, my taste runs to just one place...The Beatles. But I have to say, this is pretty damn good, I like your rhythm and flow.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Haha that's awesome, thank you.
I am not a fan of rap either but it has rhythm and delivers.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
this is very impressive...not a fan of rap...but you have a really strong voice...and i like the chorus...
the lyrics are intense...
such strong emotion comes from how you sing it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damien Ridge

6 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you could appreciate the art.

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Added on September 9, 2018
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