Needin' You

A song I wrote for my girlfriend.

Don't know if cause he's getting older

If he's showing that he's getting tired of it all

A lit cigarette, loves singing

Sing him a better verse so he can listen for a hint of sin in it

A sinner sitting like a sentenced prisoner

Sick of all of it that's piled up since he was a kid

So he sinks his meds

Always thinking if

If he was rich he'd give

Maybe he's rich, instead

Of all the glitz and glammer

He was built for stamina

This is how he was

This is how he is

This is the amount of love

Given without a look 

Drink the fountain of

Youth, and now a look

Got the devil on his shoulder

Holding up his own while he's smoldering

Smoking that something

Soaking alone in the sun

But all of the sudden

There's someone in love 

And so is he 

They sow a seed

It's like they know this scene

It's like a book adapted to a movie

It's nice to see but to read it's so beautiful

Sitting by a campfire 

With their hand's tied

That's her man smiling

He could say I love you

And that's something that's true

He could dance right now

Honey that's right 

How we past time

What'll never last, crying

Never stand by while she's down

Never let her crash, free her from drowning

Stealing the crown, he is a mountain

She is the now

He is astounded

She isn't challenging his opinion when it's different

And there's a balance between them you can't get with just anyone

She's not just anyone

Please stop time while he meets those eyes with a geeked up smile

Baby count 1 2 3

For the rest of my life 

I'll be needing you, needing you

Just stop a second

Before we sing 5 6 7 8

I'm needing you, I'm needing you

He played his cards

Had the ace of spades

It almost saved him but

But he's never played this game before

Didn't know that he was safe so he folded

Brave, so he told her

Never been so intensely in love and he's been hurt before

Innocent in intentions, it's something he was searching for

So don't you go pick him apart, as long as you give him your honesty

This whole thing could be like winning the lottery

She's a queen being treated like gold

A kiss in the morning

Holdin her close while he kisses her more

This is the order

In the chaos

Convinced she's his soulmate

Some would think it's impossible

What are the odds, can't stop thinking

He is in love with a goddess, 

It's not an option to be without her

His heart's just beating louder

A start to freedom and that's a promise

Even after they age

Had our first kiss in a field of fire flies

So magical, dancin, how did this happen

That's not your average attraction

Perfect match, understanding and passion

Put the past in a box

Burn it in the wind till the bandage is gone 

Pass him the rock

Skippin across the water

Hittin the thought's that bother

Give him a little smile

He'll give you his all and follow

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Reviews

[wordman]

reads like a top ten hit,i enjoyed it

[Karmee]

This is so very good, Really enjoyed the words, This is really good I am listening to it now.

[danielle.]

I enjoyed your lyrics, she’s a lucky girl. Off I go to listen now...

[Seeker]

Reads so well. A majestic composition. Love the lines: Put the past in a box, burn it in the wind till the bandage is gone. May you reach stardom.

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

Encore!!!! Great song I loved it

[Falcon1]

Amazing Song way to go Bravo

[Falcon1]

Enjoyed this beloved story of love w/affection your masterful write was a pleasure to read. A Great Story of love told with a blessing from God above. Your talent is shown deeply here.

[Damien Ridge]

I appreciate it! Thanks.

[Duncan Brown]

Well written and works on the page as well as in song. Loved it.

[Damien Ridge]

Thank you!

[Duncan Brown]

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[Lykos]

Was expecting a poem when I clicked this, but wow, this is an unreal song and your singing it as well, makes it all the better, can hear the feeling in your voice rather then my head. Well done!!

[Damien Ridge]

Thank you for coming by to check it out!