Wings

Wings

A Poem by Damien Ridge
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A story of self, a song for me.

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A star in the night with darkness surrounding
It's hard to pronounce right, it keeps coming out wrong
Believe the inner child when it speaks, seek
Breathe deep when you reach peace, leap
It's not a ledge, it's an airstrip
But you said in your head that you can't bare it
Who cares if you can't stand it, you cherish your fam's hand
Just stand clear of the landing
Stampede in to battle
Retreat, enemies leave and their battered
At least defeat each of your bad thoughts
That's not a big reach, take the ladder
Man up, no just be who you are now
With a reason to keep speaking, go talk now
Walk farther than fathers of fathers, daughters of mothers
Brothers of daughters and daughter's of brothers
Got caught up in living everyday like it was my last
It would never change, just patterns
Ever rearranging, how to put the things in place that matter
Just madness
How could this happen, act quick, magic
Cast it, establish any single way I can manage to grab it
I'm just barely able to grasp it
Unstable, unmanaged
Capable of only what I'm focused on
If hope is gone, I'm holding on the rope
Slowly going down the only route I know
Those that know me know I sold my soul for the sickness
It's sickening, I said I'm sinking
In a sea full of symphonies
Memories of melodies, so mellow and deep
Send me to a heaven so free, regret is no thing
I'm better if me is bettering me
In bed with the feeling of set in a dream
I'm set to release

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My wings unfold, they take me high
I'd keep you warm and cold at the same time
Fly
Wind on our face, scenery amazing
Breathtaking, but wait, seem to be escaping
Just save me from taking another pill
Or a way to remain sane, am I crazy?
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It's like I open up a door
Standing in the frame I look at what's before me
I'm sorry if I never look back at the past after the fact
Casting a shadow at that
There's an illumination that saved me
Sick of playing all the games
I bet you're sick of saying the same things
Kid complaining there for days
I'm containing all my anger and saving it for a way out
Of a state where I'm in danger and dangling by a thread count
Need strength now
Everything it takes now
Not escape, let's make every single face proud
In the way are mistakes, never break down
On another train, am I crazy or sane?
How do I spread these broken wings
I've reached the ceiling and the room is squeezing me
I need the freedom and I need the room to breathe
I can see the sea underneath the moon
This kingdom
Got caught up in living everyday like it was my last
It would never change, just patterns
Ever rearranging, how to put the things in place that matter
Just madness
How could this happen, act quick, magic
Cast it, establish any single way I can manage to grab it
I'm just barely able to grasp it
Unstable, unmanaged
Capable of only what I'm focused on
If hope is gone, I'm holding on the rope
Slowly going down the only route I know
Those that know me know I sold my soul for the sickness
It's sickening, I said I'm sinking
In a sea full of symphonies
Memories of melodies, so mellow and deep
Send me to a heaven so free, regret is no thing
I'm better if me is bettering me
In bed with the feeling of set in a dream
I'm set to release

© 2016 Damien Ridge


Author's Note

Damien Ridge
A song I made, the video is of me playing it live with my acoustic. Let me know what you think!

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This is absolutely breathtaking for me. When I first started reading the lyrics, I noticed each word was written with care and meaning, however when I came upon, "Got caught up in living everyday like it was my last," I was hooked. The meaning of this song is beautifully written. I also would like to point out I love how you play with your words and integrate sound devices. Beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, much love!



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Very good I loved the poem I love the. Lip too but cos I'm old lol had trouble keeping up or taking in the words as you sang that's just me cos I'm old but bravo very well done keep going

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Well thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it. And no worries! You still were able to appreciate it .. read more
This was really cool. I read it myself before listening to the audio just because I was curious of my impression of just the written word compared to
it through the author's voice.

It was really interesting. I love the alliteration you use throughout, and when I listened to it I realized that you emphasized different things than I did on my initial read.

The pace is spot on in my opinion. It isn't continuous - it more mirrors life and what you are saying. There are valleys and highs.

Thanks for sharing!
Lea

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Wow, thanks for the review! Glad you took the time to read, then listen, and take it all in. Much ap.. read more
So good! I'm officially a fan

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Awesome! That's great.
I bet you will become a big rockstar you will have a huge fanfare

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend!
Seriously like this, you have some mad tallent! I wish there was something I could offer in the way of moving this craft of yours even higher but I think you've got this. Best I can offer is awe and leave you to it so I might enjoy some more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Well thank you ha! Brings me a lot of joy hearing that stuff. Writing I usually do myself, but if yo.. read more
Touché Armada

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
This is quite a song/poem. Some really catchy lines you've got here but the one which caught my eye was this one:
"Breathe deep when you reach peace"
And I thought, do we really reach peace?... seems like a never ending quest for me...

I also loved your phrase "sea full of symphonies"

Cool piece of work and I actually like your voice too (heard the other song you posted too) :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Well thank you for checking out my music! Your comments are well received. And true, I haven't even .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

yeah more like being dead would be the eternal peace we've been looking for ;P
You're welcom.. read more
This is amazing. Very unique and intriguing. It flowed beautifully. Also love the tats lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Well thank you! And hah, thanks, I'm actually working on getting my face tattoos removed!
Annie.x

7 Years Ago

Good luck with that, hopefully not too painful. I'm actually going to get my first tattoo later this.. read more
Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Little more painful than getting it, lasers and all... Well good luck! And you're welcome. Thanks.
Your music is so pure and beautiful! I hope I get to hear more! Thank you for sharing (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Thank you again ha! All smiles here.
This was pure talent. Super impressed. You brought in a poetic touch to the concept of rap. The whole poem just brings in so many feelings and emotions. The rhyme scheme was amazing, well flowing and soothing. The choice of words were great as well and really gave me a wonderful imagery to the whole poem. I read your poem first and then watched the video. I think this was something very unique. Good stuff!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Well thank you for your compliments! I'm happy you enjoyed the song/poem. You're words motivate me t.. read more
The song and words are amazing. Worthwhile words and thoughts gave meaning to the song. Thank you Damien for sharing your work. Need more writers and song men.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Ridge

7 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote, I appreciate your words!
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Damien.

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Added on January 25, 2016
Last Updated on January 25, 2016
Tags: Wings, Damien, Ridge, Music, Guitar, Lyrics, Acoustic


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