This had me on the verge of tears, it was so powerful. Maybe I'm just a tad too emotional tonight, but this really spoke to me in many ways. You really have a way with words, and your lyrics are always so powerful and intense, for lack of a better word. I'm very impressed, as always. Wonderfully written, amazing flow, and very clearly heartfelt.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I'm glad you could connect to it. It's kind of unavoidable in a relationship... One of you will die .. read moreI'm glad you could connect to it. It's kind of unavoidable in a relationship... One of you will die first. Kinda sucks when you try and get more and more attached to someone lol. Thanks for reviewing!
liked it ( not in a stupid-thumbs-up-icon-sort-of LIKE) but I smiled when I was able to turn the sound up on the computer (@Valentine ...I would love to get a number on how many of us work this thing in a total sounds off environment... but the sound does make all the difference)
In any event, being new to this site and new to 'the writing thing' I will simply say that I smiled when I heard the audio, rhythm did everything to make it be something that you wanted to follow the lyrics in...
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I appreciate the review, and glad you could appreciate the music! Thank you.
this is so cool! have you ever tried slam poetry? this poem would be great. there is alot of feeling that hit me in this and i think if u read it like a poem and put emphasis on certain words when you read it, it would be like stellar.
nice job man
Thank you, I appreciate it! Gonna be making a video for this one, going in the studio with it tomorr.. read moreThank you, I appreciate it! Gonna be making a video for this one, going in the studio with it tomorrow.