Echo (Song)

Echo (Song)

A Poem by Damien Davison
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A song I wrote and performed. https://www.facebook.com/meddmusic

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These days
The normal routine has changed
It's not the same
And I feel the pain
And then I
See your face on display
It can't replace 
The space
That you grace had erased
Within me
Can I
Have one
More moment with a friend
Have fun
Just hold you here again
Here's to
Saying so much with out words

Now every time I wake up
I get a feeling of us
The only feeling I trust
But the feeling is busted
My emotions are rushing
No, the oceans are nothing
Your devotion was something
A pure motion of love and

I've been trying to forget
How could I go through it laying in our bed
How can I move through without crying cause your dead
Playing like a movie, memory flying through my head

I can only hear your echo
The only time I hear you say I love you anymore

It feels like she's right here, right here next to me
I wonder if she can feel me too
Can you feel me?

We always knew
But could never be prepared
Thought we'd make it through 
It's our heaven in the air
We were both young
Positively in love
When we thought of this stuff
Just forget and don't care

If you were back
I'd attack the madness that lasted
A disaster
This selfish actor brought sadness
Never planned it
Handled this over a gamble
Never lasted, damn with it
Hopeless
An a*****e

But you were there to give me a lift
Alone with a broken heart you said I could fix with a kiss
I regret ever leaving you alone with our kid
Show you that I love you
I wish that I could prove it again

It's too late to say sorry
And to make up for mistakes
I'm about to break
I'm falling
Can't I say a thank you
For the greatness
Honor
Unexpected change
I wanna save this
Gotta

But all I hear is an echo
Your voice in the wind
Reappears when I let go
Tales of a life
Half a century old
Remember when she'd hide?
Then say "Where'd ya go?"
She grew up so fast
Baby girl
Where'd the time go
Where's the laughs 
In a world
Without my girl
Can't outlast
But I did.

© 2013 Damien Davison


Author's Note

Damien Davison
Just thinking about when I get old with my fiancee/wife. I wrote and performed this song. It is copyrighted. https://www.facebook.com/meddmusic

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This had me on the verge of tears, it was so powerful. Maybe I'm just a tad too emotional tonight, but this really spoke to me in many ways. You really have a way with words, and your lyrics are always so powerful and intense, for lack of a better word. I'm very impressed, as always. Wonderfully written, amazing flow, and very clearly heartfelt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you could connect to it. It's kind of unavoidable in a relationship... One of you will die .. read more
liked it ( not in a stupid-thumbs-up-icon-sort-of LIKE) but I smiled when I was able to turn the sound up on the computer (@Valentine ...I would love to get a number on how many of us work this thing in a total sounds off environment... but the sound does make all the difference)

In any event, being new to this site and new to 'the writing thing' I will simply say that I smiled when I heard the audio, rhythm did everything to make it be something that you wanted to follow the lyrics in...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

I appreciate the review, and glad you could appreciate the music! Thank you.
Very cool, great lyrics... and the Demo was really cool. Very talented!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

I appreciate it, thank you!
this is so cool! have you ever tried slam poetry? this poem would be great. there is alot of feeling that hit me in this and i think if u read it like a poem and put emphasis on certain words when you read it, it would be like stellar.
nice job man

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

I have not, thanks for the suggestion though!
Nice work very deep rooted.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
Kudos to an intriguing song.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Only could read it as this is my quiet room...nicely done..Valentine

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Cool song, man...thanks so much for sharing it with us. I love this place. We get to sample the stars before they become stars ;-)

-kimmer

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Hahaa, I really appreciate that, a lot!
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

De nada; you've got serious talent.
Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

:)
wow. that is a great song! good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
liberty sheldon

11 Years Ago

your most welcome.
well written cool to finally see sum more work from you dude this was well done the flow and plot went well together keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it! Gonna be making a video for this one, going in the studio with it tomorr.. read more
Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

the audio was great you're a great artist
Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

Thanks again!

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Added on January 14, 2013
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