Art of the Craft (Poem)

Just a writer's thoughts...

The energy flows from my mind

To the carefully crafted words that I rhyme

Picking and choosing

My mind a thesaurus

Winning and losing

Through verses and chorus

Reviews

[Jack Reaper]

indeed these are a writers thoughts. you did in 6 lines what goes through my head in hours. it obvious that subject matter is no obstacle for you my friend. keep it up.

[Damien Davison]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

[ms. barrie]

this is incredible, from of all that i have read of your writings thus far, i feel this is my favorite.
very enlightening poem, so few words, speaks so much. the last four lines are my favorite. great job, thanks for sharing :)

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much for the review, and I'm glad you appreciate my words!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, and i most definitely did. sorry for my late/lack of reviews i am trying to get to all of them as fast as i can.

[Damien Davison]

That's quite fine, haha I have many myself!

[Todenpuhuja]

Having read the three read requests from you, I can credit you for not being afraid of trying different styles of poetry. 'Tis magnificent to be able to write in different styles, especially if one knows when to use which one to get the best possible effect.
Your language in "An Inch From Death" seemed a bit crude and unsharpened, but after reading the two other poems, I realised 'twas not because of your inability to use words, thence concluding that you intended it so, and I would not say 'twas a bad choice.
Judged by those three works from you, you indeed show some promise. All in all, I enjoyed reading them.

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you took the time to read my other work, realizing my ability to adapt to different styles. It just flows really, I just understand the style the writing should be in I suppose. Again, thank you, I will be sure to be checking your work out in return.

[Ana Soo]

Your linguistic style is very captivating and great use of metaphor too. You're good at using the free verse form.

[Damien Davison]

I really appreciate that, thank you!

[de_maruf]

fine

[Damien Davison]

Thanks!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like it! So you must be a lyricist! Very well done.

[Damien Davison]

Yea I've been writing songs longer than poems, thank you for viewing!

[Tarry Franck]

Take a bow! Love this - very well crafted

[Damien Davison]

Why thank you!

[Tarry Franck]

You're quite welcomed :)

[Sacha Davison]

"Picking and choosing
My mind a thesaurus "

very clever, brother.
shelf worthy i'd say. good show!

[Damien Davison]

I appreciate it bro, thanks a lot!

[Kelsey]

So short, yet so beautiful. You do a fine job of covering the thoughts of a writer in such few words. I always enjoy your work, and this piece is no different - beautifully crafted words.

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much, I always enjoy your reviews!

[}Echo{]

I like this. It's kind of short, but it's cool. Your an awesome writer, keep writing! :)

[Damien Davison]

It means a lot, thank you!