i love this kind of piece...it rocks from the beginning to end...no wasted words.
tightly constructed, less is more.
and to rhyme with Thesaurus so naturally like you did..
this didn't feel constructed...feels like it just flowed out of you..
nice--and yes...such a poet's poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Indeed, was actual at a point of writers block, then imagined the flow. Thank you for reading/review.. read moreIndeed, was actual at a point of writers block, then imagined the flow. Thank you for reading/reviewing!
Our minds can be compared to a thesaurus or a dictionary. Haha, that's very true. I've never thought of it like that...some words just become embedded in our minds so we can just have them on hand when we need them. Love these words, so good!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much for the review, I appreciate it!
Short, but straight to the point. I like this. It's like what goes through every writer's mind when putting the pen or pencil to paper.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much for reading my work, I'll be sure to read yours after time slows down a little, .. read moreThank you very much for reading my work, I'll be sure to read yours after time slows down a little, lol.
Stunningly simple and wonderously familiar to those of us who try to create a work of art in words. All Good Things, Neville
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you again Neville, I appreciate the reads, I will be sure to get back to reading after the hol.. read moreThank you again Neville, I appreciate the reads, I will be sure to get back to reading after the holidays!