I let my obsession (of becoming a tough and bad as I could just for the moment I would meet up with some guys again) ruin everything in my life... I accomplished what I sought out and I have the scars and people that shared some of those crazy memories with me to prove it... But was it worth it? No. I lost focus of my family. My new born daughter. Never let what someone else does or says affect you and just be you no matter what. Never fear.
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In the barrios of Brazil a person encounters overcrowdedness, makeshift homes, improvised gardens, rooftop parties and a general feeling of lack of sobriety. Someone living there, would work hard to get in deeper.... its easier. To someone returning, he takes each view again, a step at a time. It appears less true, but it is more orderly. Stick to your guns buddy boy! A great write.
Very nice. I love the strong message, I can feel your emotion in every line. I hope you've found yourself back on the path to peace. Great write :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Only recently have I found it. Just had to age a little and get out of the teens, mature... Thank yo.. read moreOnly recently have I found it. Just had to age a little and get out of the teens, mature... Thank you for the review!
Wow, I'm in awe. The flow of this is just amazing, and I love the story that's being told. Every word fits together so precisely with the rest of the piece, and the whole thing is just beautiful in its own special way. This piece seems to be a deep look into the mind of the writer, making it that much more special - thank you for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Pretty much just woke up and this is the first thing I read so .. read moreThank you for reading and reviewing! Pretty much just woke up and this is the first thing I read so you've made my day good from the very beginning haha thanks!
very encouraging poem, one i myself can relate to, somewhat, your choice of words is very original and i enjoyed the rhyme and flow of this, these lines stood out to me, and they're my favorite...
Stepping in to the realm of chaos
Energy rampaging
Blinding my sight
Testing myself
All for what they caused
Enemies lighting the fires of fight
great write. thanks for sharing :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you, I really appreciate the review! Glad you could relate, somewhat :P
12 Years Ago
i cannot relate to trying to be a bad a*s but i can relate to what you described in at the end of y.. read morei cannot relate to trying to be a bad a*s but i can relate to what you described in at the end of your author's note:
. Never let what someone else does or says affect you and just be you no matter what. Never fear.
words, a person's actions do hurt, not only that they linger, i am too trying to slay their voice i sometimes here in my heart. you welcome, it was my pleasure to read, take care :)