She Wants It (Song)

So I wanted to make a bumping track that sounds like a club tune but I am not one of them so I changed it up a little. Not my usual style haha.

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Mature content. Ages 18+. These ideas are being made fun of by me, I do not actually think like what I write in these verses.

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She wants it 

I see her

She flaunts it

I need her

She wants it

She wants it

She wants it

I want her

Yea, I went with a simple chorus

S**t's still banging

Say the same thing four times just to prove a point

Mix the drink with a beat and noise

You'll seperate ladies from w****s

Till unconcious they'll ignore

Throwing their conscience out the door

Oh boy!

Plus I'm the s**t

B***h how could you not want this

I'm so far gone I don't see you

Just a product of my ego

Pass the chronic

Then upheaval 

B***h you taunt

I go medieval

F**k the sun

I'm burnin seagulls

The world is somehow mine and I'm ready for retrieval

Hahaha

You know I run this s**t

Now get your b***h up off my dick

You f*****g punk I'll sock you quick

I'm way past drunk and so is my clique

I'll drunken punch you, so you pick

To not come tough or think you're slick

Or I'll jump and run you out this b***h

Get your hands in the air

Wave em, dance in the air

Shake that a*s and send those vibes through your eyes with your hands in your hair

Come here, dance with no care

S**t out, dance with no fear

Act like there's nobody here

Then whisper in my ear

She wants it 

I see her

She flaunts it

I need her

She wants it

She wants it

She wants it

I want her

When in this drunken haze did I end up next to you

Last night I was not myself, now clear vision, f**k I'm next to you

Don't mistake that as a compliment

Your face is better dark in here

Mistake, mental punishment

Escape, slam a couple beer

Again, this tonight

Another b***h, alright!

Sunglasses on I hit the club

I'm in the zone, about to throw

Any tatted up gansta down that wants to show

How big of a f*****g loser he is

Quick watch, I'm losing it kid

Teeth getting kicked the f**k in

I thought i was cooler than this

Tougher than s**t

More solid than piss

He won at the start of this

Why is it we go to the club 

So focused on the other guys

What's up, no love man still just hate

Step up man or avert your eyes

Get your hands in the air

Wave em, dance in the air

Shake that a*s and send those vibes through your eyes with your hands in your hair

Come here, dance with no care

S**t out, dance with no fear

Act like there's nobody here

Then whisper in my ear

She wants it 

I see her

She flaunts it

I need her

She wants it

She wants it

She wants it

I want her

See this was all just a f*****g joke

Now don't believe all the lies that I wrote

I can't even sing, couldn't hit the notes

I'm trying to dream and pave a dirt road

With deceit

With these seeds I rose

And made the theme about ol' club hoes

She wants it 

I see her

She flaunts it

I need her

She wants it

She wants it

She wants it

I want her

Link to original beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xpu7zuIEuO8&feature=related

Author's Note

It's a joke, I'm not serious, it's making fun of a lot of different things about people and the music industry...

Reviews

[Claire Twinn]

It's good that you point out how pathetic the attitude of women being b*****s, s***s and hos is. I would like to see those words removed from all rap songs! Surely we can be creative without insulting half the world?

[Damien Davison]

Oh just you wait! Oh just you wait haha. Indeed we can be! Thank you for reviewing!

[tarryfranck97]

Can't read right now - my niece is behind me brushing my hair so will check it out later :)
LOL

[Damien Davison]

Haha no problem, thanks for taking a peek!

[Frieda P]

Wow, is that you? Gonna give Eminem a run for his money. I really like it!! ;)

[Damien Davison]

Yea that's me lol, I don't even compare to him haha! But thank you.

[Frieda P]

Hey you're really good, don't underestimate yourself, and never apologize for your genius. ;)

[Frieda P]

lol it's stuck in my head now, that's always a good sign!

[Damien Davison]

Perfect! I really appreciate it!

[Frieda P]

Listening again. ;)

[~SouthernGirl~]

Haha, wow. I like this. It has a nice beat and it's funny. This is really good. ;)

[Damien Davison]

Thanks a lot! Tried to make it a joke :P

[~SouthernGirl~]

No problem. Haha, nice. ;p

[captain]

I like it, a rap song. Awesome!

[Damien Davison]

Thanks!

[B-poet]

Ridiculously Hilarious. Very catchy and upbeat. You've proved your point very well here. Kinda reminds me of a good ol fashioned funny parody. Nice job. :)

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much! I don't usually do funny stuff lol. But a lot of people are jokes anyway haha. Thanks for reviewing!

[Ruth]

Well...serious or not, I hear the talent. I myself am in a band and know the lengths it goes to to write lyrics of any nature. Rap may not be everyone's spice of life, personally, I like all genres of music.
I think you could make a point with this. The music industry? Well...nuff said ;) :)

[Damien Davison]

Thanks for being able to appreciate it! Yea, it'll be nice to get in the studio with it, we'll be making a video too. Going to try and make it kinda humorous to go with the song...

[Ruth]

Most welcome, good luck :)

[scripted]

not my style of rap but its not your style so i quess it works
but i do give you credit because its really hard to write music
including rap

[Damien Davison]

Heh, thanks, I want to show I can do many styles. I don't want to limit myself really. I dunno. Thanks for the review!

[Jack Reaper]

oh thats just hilarious. jeezus. i needed that one. that was great

[Damien Davison]

Haha, glad you enjoyed it!