Control. (Song)

There's truth to be found 

Around any dark corner

The shadow people lie 

To control us mortals

Manipulate weaker minds

In to submission

The fear takes a hold of them

F**k what they're missing

But to come out and say 

What you see's not easy

For fear of the normal ones 

Taking away everything

For fear of medication 

Numbing the power

To see a different path 

Then rainbows and flowers

A cloud of darkness 

Surrounds me

Light gets through 

Cause I let it's warm energy

Flow through my veins 

When I'm holding my daughters hand

Always be room for her 

In this cold world of mine

Don't want to impose

Or force ideologies

Keeping her mind pure and simple

Is hard I see

Props to the zealots of god.

You heard what I said

And I'll say it again

I've believed a lot of beliefs

None of them win

Felt the presence of God, but power from Nine Worlds

I'm sorry to tell you

All of them work

It's a matter of mind 

Over matter alright

You can grab power 

If set in mind's sight

Quit waging wars over this s**t

Accept that it could be 

And only it could be.

Reviews

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Nice ! Works perfectly for a rap song !

[Damien Davison]

Indeed it does! Thanks a lot!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

:)

[Mia]

The mind is a very powerful thing, and that much power is dangerous if not used right. It is dangerous to others, but especially to one’s self. We live in our minds, kind of. If you fill it with fear, you are forcing yourself to live in fear. No one can control your mind without your permission.
“A cloud of darkness
Surrounds me
Light gets through
I feel it's warm energy”
I love how wrote about this light and it turned out to be your daughter, that is very precious. YES! Keep her mind and pure and simple and most importantly keep it her own. The best thing a person can have is the ability to think for themselves, especially in a world where there are some many people trying to shove their views down your throat. Not that I think that is what you would do. This is a great write and clearly thought provoking. My mind is buzzing.

[Damien Davison]

Thanks a lot, I appreciate the great review. Check out the video if you wanted to hear the actual song that I made that's going on my upcoming mix-tape

[Mia]

Sounds very cool, it's nice to be able to hear it! Good luck with your mix-tape :)

[Steven]

Man, nice flow. Just needs a hook

[Damien Davison]

Just the intro song to my mix-tape, this one and another aren't going to have choruses. I appreciate you checking it out, thanks a lot!

[Steven]

Yeah, it's pretty sick

[Matty Bosox]

WOW my friend....I am a HUGE HUGE lover of song writers such as Corey Taylor and Jamie Josta...This is right down Taylor's alley...Very Pointful and very energy and emotion felt....By emotion I have to say, like Corey Taylor, you put things into your lyrics that are just so...Well...Something that makes you pause and say thats awesome because I can soo relate to this....Do you have a band?? Do you sing?? Because you can be huge buddy...Great job

[Matty Bosox]

Very powerful, like Hesitate or Through Glass, Scars, several others...This is very Stone Sour but obviously what makes it brilliant is its not Stone Sour its you

[Damien Davison]

Thank you, I really appreciate that, I love playing through the glass on guitar. Check out the video, and yea I do sing too, I have other songs coming out soon, 8 are going on my mix-tape, I'll be singing in most, 2 don't have choruses, this is one. Thanks again!

[Matty Bosox]

Not a problem buddy its my pleasure