Control. (Song)

There's truth to be found 

Around any dark corner

The shadow people lie 

To control us mortals

Manipulate weaker minds

In to submission

The fear takes a hold of them

F**k what they're missing

But to come out and say 

What you see's not easy

For fear of the normal ones 

Taking away everything

For fear of medication 

Numbing the power

To see a different path 

Then rainbows and flowers

A cloud of darkness 

Surrounds me

Light gets through 

Cause I let it's warm energy

Flow through my veins 

When I'm holding my daughters hand

Always be room for her 

In this cold world of mine

Don't want to impose

Or force ideologies

Keeping her mind pure and simple

Is hard I see

Props to the zealots of god.

You heard what I said

And I'll say it again

I've believed a lot of beliefs

None of them win

Felt the presence of God, but power from Nine Worlds

I'm sorry to tell you

All of them work

It's a matter of mind 

Over matter alright

You can grab power 

If set in mind's sight

Quit waging wars over this s**t

Accept that it could be 

And only it could be.

Reviews

[scripted]

love it and i like you

[Damien Davison]

Thanks a lot!

[morgann <3]

amazing

[Damien Davison]

Thank you!

[}Echo{]

This is awsome. I really like this. :)

[Damien Davison]

I'm glad you did!

[}Echo{]

:)

[Starfruitanimal]

awesome dude, i really enjoy your stuff

[Damien Davison]

Thank you very much!

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OH MY GAWD!!!! I LISTENED TO IT!!!! AND WAS SHOCKED! Well first I read it and couldn't help but feel it was a rap so I beatboxed to it, then I listended to it, same flow just faster! :D SOOOOO COOL! GREAT JOB!!!!

[Damien Davison]

Heh, thanks a lot! I appreciate it!

[Ruth]

Brilliant! Interesting first stanza also..we are often thinking we have free will, as such...after recently reading about djinn and such like, shadow people, I am not convinced!
All we can do is believe in love and light, dissolves the shadows somewhat :)
Excellent piece
xox

[Damien Davison]

Thanks you very much! That's all we can do!

[Pax]

great choice of words...i will listen to the song later on...
this is great!!

[Damien Davison]

Thanks alot!

[Barnie14]

welcome(:

[Barnie14]

This is Great!

[Damien Davison]

That's a lot!

[Michael of Gilead]

I liked it...but i do find this idea of not imposing (your word) ideologies on our children far removed from reality...this idea of presenting all the different ideas and letting them choose....shows no pride or self belief...having no firm beliefs or showing no firm beliefs is alien to me

[Damien Davison]

Not letting your child choose what they want instead of shoving beliefs in to their so easily manipulated minds seems weak to me coming from the parents. For the parents to not give the child freedom and constricting them to a religion seems wrong to me. Come from different worlds I guess. thanks for the review!

[Michael of Gilead]

You are welcome, but i did not mean forcing them...i was raised as my parents were, with definate beliefs, but i was never forced to accept it...input from your parents is important....or you end up with people worshiping rocks